Eyless?.. Topic is *Without Eyes*
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Check By midnight.. tonight
Eyless?.. Topic is *Without Eyes*
16-18 lines.
Post 2morra by 10 pm.. (i must be leaving soon)
Check By midnight.. tonight
Roc-A-Fella !
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Roc-A-Fella !
check...
Did you Ever Imagin a Lifetime that was Totally Vision Free?...
Aimlessly Walking Down a Street? Banging your Cane Relentlessly....
Talk to Me I Understand But I Dont *See* What you Mean...
I may Not Be listening Because im Konked Out in This Never Ending Day Dream....
Endless Darks Epitimy Goes On Just has Absolutely No End...
Living Petrified of LIfe's *Obstacles*, Why Me? I Dont Comprehend...
Eternity is Day to Day Waiting for This Handicap To Unleash its Wrath...
People Tell Me to Have Patience, I'll *Stumble Down the Right Path*...
Cant Fathm What The World Looks Like Out there...
Probably Just People Retarded To my Disability that All just Stop and Stare...
Clumsily Moving along, With my Dog at my Side...
Pull Out the Keys to My Porsche, Dare me to Drive?...
Clinging to the Curb For Safety From the Cars that are Flying Past...
1 Step Right and I'd Be A Windshield Stain, With Vehicles moving that Fast...
Cant See IF im Even Matching, So I may not Dress the Flyest...
But I Miraculously Acheive Lifes Goals, and I do it Though Im Eyless...
Roc-A-Fella !
No Egyptian hieroglyphics depicting the trials that await all
If it were God’s contingency plan to evolve without eyes
Man would have to take it lightly and try to conform with the times
Skin so sensitive it senses the changes in pressure
So that he can stay one step ahead and tell of change in the weather
An assortment of long appendages with cilia strands
That give him a series to grasp to draft a serious plan of action -
Discombobulated, he tries not to attract attention..
..Cuz generations taught that violence holds not the advantage
Without his sight he knows there’s nothing that’s more precious than energy
Preservation of life relies on if one has an elephant’s memory
We’d become a creature of question,
A small tribe of peaceable brethren,
Thinking what life is like if those genes had connected
Without eyes we could never grasp the full magnificent evidence
Of our total human potential from the mind of an Existentialist
Civilization would suffer heavily from a Nexus neglected
Because there’d be no evolution, Man would be the next ones to perish..
ok check this shit and get some votes on this.......
ayo really i got to go with whiteout on this one. i liked the way he put his together i mean your was nice to i just liked his better. he put it together, to where it made sence and was understandable and it rymed. so
v//whiteout
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ah good battle I think webb got this with better punches though
V/ webb
ok..
upping,,
Detroit,, sorry im gonna have to have your vote dq'd... not because im a bitch, but, this wasnt a fuckin battle you dumb fuckin herb...
THIS WAS A TOPICAL
Roc-A-Fella !
decent battle i say webb got it on flow and structure tho.. and a better vocab
both was good.. webb just dropped doper and better rhyme skills
webb
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yo pepa uppin
whit out imma go wit on htis and yo please vote my battles and if one of ur battles needs to be voted holla at me holla at me........be honest and ill be ohnest
webb go against me next or ne 1 of u.............,
go to bitchslapped to do call outs ass........................
close call . . .id say webb won tis one . . . .got better structure and flow . . . .both verses were ill doe . . . . .but vote webb 4 ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
v/ webb
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