ya know i like Verbz style, he always comes wit these sick metas and shit...he always go at his opponent, sticks to punches, even if theyre wack, theres no filler here...the most you can do is work more on the flow so its an easier read, and clear up any mistakes so you wont confuse the reader...
as for Jay, he came wit an aight opener, threw some punches but missed...the bar before the finish him* shit was good...and about that...this aint mortal kombat, your verse was above par at most, then you come wit some Wu shit, that really had nothin to do wit ya verse, so im confused at which is your style...you didnt need to throw those SAT words to hype up ya verse, good try, but try again harder...
good drop, both can work on yall flow and punches some more, but both came nice on it.
V/ Verbz