alright,10-15 lines
no dickridin or crew votes
bring ya best bitch
u bout to get murked
alright,10-15 lines
no dickridin or crew votes
bring ya best bitch
u bout to get murked
u go first cloud..........................................
man u slow fuck i'll go
check.............................
sick flows come outta my mouth i mix it so grim
spit a flow at cloud a liquify him
slit his throat like slim shady did Kim
he claims to be happy and all good
but i heard he the community bitch in the hood
he suckin on all kids of wood
my complex gets t-shirts wet when i flex, what can i say, im the best
i calculate this shit while this bitch finish writin the rest
u mutha fucka be needin a vest
u complain cuz i cause pain and call u lame
sorry cloud, but don't hate the playa just hate the game
lol...u didnt even WARN me... u shoulda PMed me...aight checking in!
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Mista Grimm is kiddie so he gettin touched like "Never-RancH-land"/
I sever HanD so now this virgin cant grab or ever "FUCK-A-MAN"//
U Sucka FAM, pre emptive strikes dude still "lost-an-failed"/
IM battle a kid called GRIM??.... da fuck is this "FAIRY-TALES"//
prevail im his menotor copy an past u know he "BITIN Dis RaPs"/
even when he rapping on bikes he aint "CYCLING TRACKS"//
im more then FIGHTing this CAT im reading out "HIS-DEATH"/
he based his name on a childs book...yet in da "HOOD-HE-REPS?"//
this DuDe is Pet, noting me on this site.." YOU MADE A MISTAKE"/ ( lol he noted me this )
NaH ya mother did when she let the condoms "SEAMEN BREAK"//
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uppin#1........................................... ........
Sorry I cant poll i only have a few posts, but ill give feed back, please hit this up honeslty after youve read.....very much appreciated
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...28#post3273828
Grim
sick flows come outta my mouth i mix it so grim
spit a flow at cloud a liquify him
slit his throat like slim shady did Kim
.......nah
he claims to be happy and all good
but i heard he the community bitch in the hood
he suckin on all kids of wood
........no
my complex gets t-shirts wet when i flex, what can i say, im the best
i calculate this shit while this bitch finish writin the rest
u mutha fucka be needin a vest
........k
u complain cuz i cause pain and call u lame
sorry cloud, but don't hate the playa just hate the game
.........nah
4/10
Cloud
Mista Grimm is kiddie so he gettin touched like "Never-RancH-land"/
I sever HanD so now this virgin cant grab or ever "FUCK-A-MAN"//
.......played
U Sucka FAM, pre emptive strikes dude still "lost-an-failed"/
IM battle a kid called GRIM??.... da fuck is this "FAIRY-TALES"//
.......no
prevail im his menotor copy an past u know he "BITIN Dis RaPs"/
even when he rapping on bikes he aint "CYCLING TRACKS"//
.......nah
im more then FIGHTing this CAT im reading out "HIS-DEATH"/
he based his name on a childs book...yet in da "HOOD-HE-REPS?"//
........lol ok
this DuDe is Pet, noting me on this site.." YOU MADE A MISTAKE"/ ( lol he noted me this )
NaH ya mother did when she let the condoms "SEAMEN BREAK"//
........no
6/10
Flow.....Cloud
Structure......Cloud
Multies........Cloud
Vocab........Cloud
Vote.......Cloud
Please hit up that link....
hell nah. cloud nine killed that shit. grimm ya wack verse cant compete to that. cloud nines verse wasnt ill as fuck but it was good and it was good enough to beat yours.
no hating... just honesty.
Mista- No...that whole verse was sort of wack...no real punches...pretty nice flow.... structure was bad....You need some metaphors....and that's enough said about you and the weak verse....
Cloud- Damn that was some hott shit...you really had some good stuff here...that opener was pretty nice....You brought some fresh stuff to RB and I'm looking forward to seeing more out of you....Nice stuff....Peace
V/Cloud9 for better verse....
aye guys vote me its only 1 -0
big nash
xplicit mind
thor
2 of ya didnt vote me up on the poll
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uppin 4 votes............................................. ....
i have got to be honest grim but i agree with everybody else cloud one this his punches were good and flow was great i enjoyed it....
cmon ppl hit this up................................................ .....
plz peepz mo votes............................................. .....
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