rhyme~ tie
punch~ Nan
personals~ Nan
structure~( u both have a bad one )
creativity~ Verbs
wordplay~ Verbs
open/close~ Nan
Nan barely took this but he took it
vt/Nan
plez vote on the battles in my sig , fairly , no d/r cuz i voted for u bullshit , thnx
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I can poll, but please return a fair vote after my good feedback
Nan
lol, Verbs, ima fuck wit it like he says in his sig
kill him wit his 2 buddies, a noun and adjective
....ok
Fuck you,5 V's and you can close this Open Homicide
tryin to battle me, but you commited career suicide
Like a Child of Destiny................i guess i Survived
....alright
so now you can check yourself under K.I.A
Pray to god, Heard he Lookin for Lost Souls in L.A
.........ok
Tellin me the crew failed,but you had no leadership skill
Now it makes sense..........i guess crack really does kill
.........good
how about you start a new one? call it the Rehab House
maybe they can teach you to win, so youll stop runnin ya mouth
....nah
4/10, nice flow and structure
Verbz
Nothin special about this feces just regular throw away shit...
Plus HEADS wudnt CO-LAB wit u if u were a PENIS SCIENTIST...
.....nice concept, could have been worded better
Tryna act hard but ur verse bars is a complete wreck...
Beatin him? nothin but sorry money he appologized in da check...
.........no
But like dry DESERTS he aint get the WIN(D) he claim he caught it aint my fault...
U know he recycle run his raps backwards its just like his name the same result...
.......ok
Ill click this dude tryna act big sad to say ima RUSh his lines...
Ur verses r sad..No wonder ..u say ur from UsherS LiNeS...
........no
Ery body standin above his body like damn NaN is really over...
But battlin him is like automatic CoFFiNs da way i dont need a closer...
........not bad
6/10....you had wordplay an dgood punches, kinda stretched tho
Vote: Verbs
well check it...Originally Posted by !.VeRbZ.!
#1 what the fuck are you talking about? that shit was gay... like... litterealy...
#2 "ckeck"? I think that was the name of my 25 cent soda...
#3 yea... so yours spells "!.ZbReV.!" your reall cool... wtf...
#4 young jeezy says it too... your point?
#5 wtf? WTF?!
LOL ^
And dude said nan's 2nd line dont rhyme? your a fuckin idiot... lol
Besides, i did not get any of your lines, your need better vocab...
the fuck...
Nan, you could of done better tho, ive seen your shit...
verbz won this battle wit beta punches and structure.....nan ur punches were aight but verbz hit harder....nan work on ur structure it was everywhere try to make it even with the lines.....verbz u can work on it a lil as well...
v/verbz (beta verse)
no hate
im dope.
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!.VeRbZ.! - You had a more complex verse which lead to heavier hitting punches. The wordplay was very ILL. Great flow maintained and better creativity.
NAN - Your verse had punches, but they were weak in comparison to !.VeRbZ.!. No beef though, cuz I was still feeling most of your stuff. Solid structure and flow.
VOTE- !.VeRbZ.!
Verbs- Nice stuff pretty decent....I'd rate your whole verse probably a 6.3/10...you need some better punches and metaphors...your flow was straight...structure was wacked up...you need to even out your lines and become better with that...Line your shit up... Other than that pretty decent....
Nan- You had some pretty dope concepts here if you get to lookin' at 'em right...your punches would've came a lot harder if you re-worded a bit there....Good stuff...Keep up the good work....6.5/10
Conclusion: This was a real close battle..you both came a bit weak and could've reworded a lot of stuff here...but you guys did pretty decent...I think (no hard feelings...just voting honest here) that nan took it with his tiight metas...that 3 line verse was a bit wack but some of the concepts were nice...you had good wordplay other than that 3 line verse...it threw the whole flow out of wack from there...so yeah....but both of you did good...No hate here....both yall are good...keep it up..Peace,
V/Nan
3-3 tied up rad da verses people..........and then vote honestly......
my vote for nan he had better punches that verb
especilally that noun and adjective shit
hahaha
AIM Bandits!
Viva La Resistance!
vote=Verbz......
Nan....had 2 good lines ....the 2 personals at Verbz.....rest was really jus filler and weak punches....
Verbz....had some dick/gay lines....ALL GAY/DICK lines are played as fuck.....the rest of your verse with the personals at Nan pulled it out though...barely
TO BOTH.....IF YOU HAVE TO EXPLAIN YOUR WORDPLAY IT = GARBAGE.......
vote =Verbz
wtfis u doin.......that vote sucked...........egt da fuck outta here wit ya garbage ass.....this vote will be disclallyfied........
man wtf p doin....he voted ontheexplanationz.......lol....what a HERB
DAWG AN QUIT CALLIN DUDES IDOIOTS U DA DUMBASS DAT VOTED ON THE BATTLE EXPLANATIONS....
its suppoosed to be 4-2
cuz he had one unexplained vote and another stupid fuck voted on the explanatiuons
man quit ya bitchin and take it like the kid that you are....
cmon son really, let shit go, i can say i deserve all votes, aint noone gonna listen to you our me...
anyways uppin...
.Tell Oomp get the doomp clear the room its now official
Droppin bombs like a North Korean Nuclear Missile.
Eastside walk it o-o-out.
I was pretty sure i explained myself clearly, that your shit sucked, why cant you get over it?
Your name says Verbz, but ur sig says Verbs... lol
funny shit...
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