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shit is silent in this mafucka
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well im bak so holla
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uhm..flow and delivery is pretty good..
i cant really roll with the concept tho.. i understand your opinion.. but it doesnt seem true to the point..you say the world is mostly christian? Check your facts on this .
pretty good work with internal rhymes.. could of done with a few solid multies maybe...
lost the flow a lil on a couple of them short lines
but all in all a most readible and good joint
stay up 1
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its the world in my eyes not the world of statistics but i get where u comin from
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lookin good, agree with the structure part but thats where im lackin too...pm a mafucka one
structure is a bitch
lmfao
anyway uppin
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was a pretty well felt read homie, nice flow.... and the structure was a lil off, but i aint gona shit on that coz it was from the heart ( as u said ) and was understandable, was a gud piece to read.... i really liked tha opener, thats what grabbed my attention.. lol, and i'd jus say elevate on tha complety i gues... the imagery wasnt much, but there was enough multis to cover it....
nice drop!
if u culd take tha time to read n return feed on my piece " i'm sorry " ...that wuld be appreciated... thanx
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