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    loves affect, loves Irony

    love is mysterious love has so many closets to open
    joyous times turn to envious times and happy hearts end up broken
    never know if the love is right, never know if the love is cheap
    hurtful events leave printed marks and those marks you'll for ever keep
    throught out my summer had drama everthing into a conflict
    never knowing whats goin down next i could never predict
    i devoted myself to this nigga some unthoughtful shit went down
    sat around the house, face struck with a frown
    he had my heart filled with trust, then he went on and cheated
    never knew his true inner feelings same sentence out his mouth repeated
    as i lay and shed tears in the night wondering if he'll be my heart
    at the beginnin of our bond he said we wont maintain from being apart
    when it came down to talkin serious his words on me had a strong effect
    i write in my journal "why don't i just die and leave the earth?"
    tired of being lied to with pain inside so what exactly am i worth?
    he almost broke my heart for her but my heart wouldn't let
    Gyrl's cousin swore up and down they belonged together, and dude usin me
    when i asked over and over to be my man true he was always refusin me
    in his deep mind and soul he knew his place was here he couldnt pretend
    but now we together, our love is once more a special mend
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    this wasnt bad had a decent flow to it..its deep n deep means that you put some solid thinking and effort into it. nice job

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    thanks..... glad you enjoyed it... i did what i could on it.........
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    thiz was tight
    i felt i was reading some type shit that be in om but thiz was nice had good rhymes, lines stretched but it was enjoyable to read though hot shit. i realte to thiz sub alot

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    nice peice felt the imagery creativity was fine......complexity was good cud of been better but good ...keep it up ill be looking for more peices from u....oh yeah and i also liked how the title matched the peice...and go hit up ma peice honestly its intitled Brotherly Love

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