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Thread: ~Inquiring Passion~

  1. #1
    SikTrik
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    ~Inquiring Passion~

    ~Inquiring Passion~

    Beginning of time love a new concept that you made fine
    climbing above that line reaching to make you mine
    crazed feelings dancing swirls of confuzion in my mind
    devined emotions seeping deep into you hopin to find
    a distinguished lover flowing glances my direction
    with my intention,i shiver up tingling with what im sensin
    burning in ur eyes ignites my will to ask your name
    smile like the sunrise in my suprise u ask the same
    exchange words,laughs,and questions to keep on asking
    night reaps morning,stars dance to my happiness thats everlasting
    magical callings bring the night to an immaculent close
    question arose,she offerd me the night if i was spending it alone
    visions blew in my mind,of how extrordinary that could be
    mirror images flashed quick again,of her being alone with me
    ....................without another breath....................
    heart near explosion,words flew from my mouth with delight
    grabbed her hand,kissed her cheek and said..........
    I would be foolish not to spend the night..............
    .......walking, holding each outher out of sight.......

  2. #2
    HaZy
    Guest
    this was a very intricate peice
    i loved the way 0it flowed together from the first letter to the last
    meanhile you built a story and emotion on those very letters
    mirror images flashed quick again,of her being alone with me

    fave line

    this was a very well written peice sik

  3. #3
    SikTrik
    Guest
    thank you very much 4 droppin
    uppin 4 some more


    get at me yall
    come on

  4. #4
    SikTrik
    Guest
    get at me yall
    come on

    UP UP UPPIN THIS THANG!!
    GET IN UR YALL..UP UP UPPIN THIS THANG! LOL

    IGH

  5. #5
    SikTrik
    Guest
    chekz this one..

    everyone checkd my other one..that i put like zero time in lol...

    so w/e..

    but put some FB..on this one igh

  6. #6
    SikTrik
    Guest
    get at me yall
    come on

    UP UP UPPIN THIS THANG!!
    GET IN UR YALL..UP UP UPPIN THIS THANG! LOL

    IGH

  7. #7
    !.VeRbZ.!
    Guest
    liked it...imagery complexity creativity...title fitted peice.....good shit man keep dropping

  8. #8
    SikTrik
    Guest
    ^^thanx playa..4 droppin something..

    i get sik of waiting afta awhile lol

    so thanx

    keep that ish comin

  9. #9
    SikTrik
    Guest
    Blah Blah Blah Blah..yall Kno The Drill

    Hit This Back With Some Fb

  10. #10
    !.VeRbZ.!
    Guest
    nice peice felt the imagery creativity was fine......complexity was good cud of been better but good ...keep it up ill be looking for more peices from u....oh yeah and i also liked how the title matched the peice...and go hit up ma peice honestly its intitled Brotherly Love

  11. #11
    !.VeRbZ.!
    Guest
    lol....my fault didnt realize i gave feed in here twice....but still hit up ma peice(brotherly love)

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