Livin' a Life of Hate

[UnitedNBlood]

Take a look at this world and realize where we at
death,murder,war always seem to be the act
i nvr had the chance to take this life for granted
i had to work, things weren't jus handed
before u think u can relate to what i am talkin bout
stop, cuz u cant
gun shots, knife wounds
goals popped like an overblown balloon
wonderin wut im doin
is God on my side?
how do i he is alive?
so many questions
yet not enough answers
people die all the time
but why...does it have to be in this life
where hate is the crime


-let me kno wut u guys think...this is my first post...wut can i do to improve myself...help me out

[M.O.U.S.E.]

It was kind of simple but not bad at all.... I love poetry so son its cool wit me kinda throw some multis in a poem i wanna see what that would sound like.... but yea not bad for ya first post...