Topical! "Its Just A Finger" ~WhiteOut~ Vs. Par~War

["lil Neefy"]

16 lines no more no less
Topic: Its just a Finger
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["lil Neefy"]

and i forgot... its 200 posts to vote

[Par-War]

make the time longer white...like an hour..its a lil challengin to write 16 good lines about a "finger" lol

["lil Neefy"]

yeah actually

it has tobe much longer.. im gettin kicked off.. so it gonna have to bee say

2morra 10 pm?? eastern time

sorry i have to bounce..if you dont like this... just fuck it and we will start over 2morra

b bak 2morra

[Par-War]

its kool fam, imma go head and drop tonight though

[Par-War]

rigamortised, stigmantation with a little contortion and disfiguration
a pale blue finger slated
no tinglin sensation cause the blood no longer lingers stationed
body devoured already in steady patience, rotted into the notted limbs
corroted artieries no prob-lems, no longer a pulse under the bloched skin
Cause of Death: Hotchkins; Time Left To Live: Cut Off Thin
got caught stealin' some rocks then, dude hasnt been caught since
(cause he's dead dumbass, it makes sence unless your nods dence)
Coffin: mahogony wood with trimming.......................
......... a plush cusion built for the dead; made for the living
corpse decayed; remains? chilling; suit was a green clover hue
"he would turn over in his grave if he heard this"............
..............................irony is he was leaned over spued
all his dreams over-due, deceased, somethin' that rings in so true
his flesh leaves no clue, death bares no closure, reviels him no truth
God dosnt know his face, the dirt decomposed his features....
............peeling so smooth
Lady Fortune has gone missing......and until Justice brings her
all thats left as Proof of Life.........................is just a finger

[norminator]

yo u spit hot fire that was nice i wish i could do that lol

[RAWW]

wdf???????????????????????????????????????????????

["lil Neefy"]

good spit par.. 1 problem though... over half of this was off topic lol

started off real nice.. but then you went into dead corpses and all this other stuff..

i'll have my ish tonight sometime

[Par-War]

.....no it wasnt, I exentuated and broadened the topic, you didnt actually expect me to write about a "finger" did you. The topic was "Its Just A Finger" so I wrote about a decayed corpse leaving.......just a finger. Its not what you expected, cause im thinking outside the box, but it is "dead" on the topic (see, thats a pun)
uppin for your drop though, good luck

[blessedtongue]

Par Dat Shyt Was Tight...i Like Da Direction You Took The Topic Into...wit De Conclusion Drawing Everything 2 Gether Nice Flow...i'll Be Back To Vote Once He Drop