yo i hadda holl@ @ this joint.. mos def of the heezy
only part i had nits with was
He screamed for the first time
He cried in unbelief for the first time
He covered his nakedness with a leaf
just all those He He HE starting the lines wasnt too attraCTIVE TO MY EYES
fukken dope drop tho.. i like the way it merged in and out of the picture
first poem?.. you got it on point dun
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