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  1. #1
    SikTrik
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    Happy Soul

    Thinking a thought that u cant substain
    cant arrange ur feelings around the pain
    hurt melting the veins breaking ur skin
    taking a breath,soul suffocating from with in
    a dark cold cage traps ur heart swolling it whole
    body pays the tole,left a hole, u crumble and fold
    life traces new paths,left with new questions 2 ask
    new destiny a new task,find foes and new friends 2 unmask
    feeling no remorse,fight through the agony and tears
    walk a strong steady pace cuz no end will near
    hold ur head high and leave room for love
    no one thing is enough,seek glory from above
    leave a world behind resting you soul
    for your presence 2 remain remember and whole


    an unhappy souls seaks life
    a happy one fears the unhappy
    be strong and live out the hard times
    cuz a fearful soul filled with life will be happy

  2. #2
    SikTrik
    Guest
    not lookin 4 zero FB...im lookin 4 a lot of FB LOL

    just a little something..plz i hate seeing nothing!

  3. #3
    SikTrik
    Guest
    lol damn ..i dont think ive ever gott'n ne feedback on ne poem ive ever droppd on RB..they just get pushed down faster and faster..i dont think ppl actually see them lmao..

    its w/e

    upin

  4. #4
    SikTrik
    Guest
    here i even droppd 2..and still nothing in either one..wtf

    well hopefully things will change here soon..

    FB FB FB...PLZ

  5. #5
    SikTrik
    Guest
    not lookin 4 zero FB...im lookin 4 a lot of FB LOL

    just a little something..plz i hate seeing nothing!

  6. #6
    HaZy
    Guest
    giving a reply usually gets you one

    regardless

    a dark cold cage traps ur heart swolling it whole
    ^
    VERY GOOD DESCRIPTION GAVE a good chill to the spine except i think you meant swallowing not swolling

    was a fair piece the description is what held it together for the most part
    5-10
    hazy

  7. #7
    SikTrik
    Guest
    i have replied 2 pplz...so ya dont worry bout that...

    but thanx 4 droppiin

    and yes i did mean swallowing thats my bad!

    thanx

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