What is life

[The Vortex]

yeah this is cool.. very poetic.. i can see it being performed as a hard spoken poem

appears like a poet i heard on one of naz earlier albums..dropping that knowledge str8 up n down


Lastly God i plead,
when i die, don't go to hard on my sins,
After all, once i'm 6 feet deep my soul will fly to the sky, and the responsibility of peace will be left on my next of kins,


nice, now thats good poetry for sure

imagery dope

nice 23 see sum fresh and sensible talent

stay up

[P. Mortuus]

Yo thanks for words of encouragement, helps ta keep rhymers afloat. uppin' for mo feeds.

[Grafik]

will sum1 check out my verse?

[Mic D]

content wise kid ...nice....like the concept of the whole rhyme....structure simple but the overall tone set is nice

"Life is like a women who stays with you but then decieves, while death is like a women who will eternally except you......."
^Best lines

[P. Mortuus]

Can't believe Homie, Darrel ya gave out compliments, but preciate though, keep feeds rollin'

[P. Mortuus]

uppin' for more feeds

[P. Mortuus]

uppin' for more feeds

[P. Mortuus]

uppin' for more feeds

[P. Mortuus]

waoting for the 100th viewing dogs were are y'all

[D. Jizzle.]

good song but he is a fag

[P. Mortuus]

ANymore feedz?

[P. Mortuus]

I'v added 2 om's i feeded on, so check them out as well

[Antonio Banderas]

It was an okay read, but I'm not really feeling this... No hate, but I thought you could have picked a better topic and stayed on it a little better... There wasn't any interesting vocabulary in this drop...

[P. Mortuus]

ah well, Paka can't please everyone huh, Nah homie i aint takin no hating, cause i wrote this in 25 mins while thinkin' what is life.

[P. Mortuus]

137 people viewed but only 28 feeds, need more thann that dogs.