Freestyle: Open

[Tha Lizard]

You aint ready for Tha Lizards mind/
Cause my mind is ahead of its time/
My mind is ahead of my own mind/
Gonna blow up like I stepped on a mine/
Everyone listens when Tha Lizard rhymes/
Beware when I pop tha nine/
Like a sniper in the scope I take my time/
Pull tha trigga and embed it in your mind/
Its like I got the mind of Einsten/
Like I took it off and put it on mine/

I'm done tell me what you think and holla back.

[JayKay]

If you spit that completely off the top of the head, with out writing it down, then I suppose it would be good. But the one thing I didn't like, was how much you used the word "Mind" plus you rhymed "Mine" and "time" more than once, which is "fine" (Haha...ha) But, if you're not going to have a specific subject to talk about, then use lots of multi's and other things to grab attention. Not a horrible open mic I suppose, keep it up.

[J-Hova]

It was ight ok flow I agree wit jayKay if it was off the head its good

[Mistral]

16 line minimum, no freestyles