Brightening..
Blinded eyes squint.. Bright lights glint in darkness..
Streetlamps show suburbians the way - so heartless..
Pavements shrink in distance away from me... Perspectives..
Of what this night shall bring at the end of my road is weightless..
Inspirational..
Travelling so far to simply catch a breath of that scent...
Gravelling rationality - To even further my minds absence...
Meaning so much yet taking so little from my mind..
My heart will find.. this environment is tiring; yet kind..
I envision.......... The Death of Liams thoughts for one...
That object's given feelings make him feel so immortal... and gone..
With quick revision.. he decides he needs to grab his moments..
Make it last - like the sun, never let anybody else own this.
Exciting..
Taking breaths to stabilise the race inside my lungs.. so fast..
So fast i am to make decisions that change my life.. First and last..
I understand this feeling, or do i?....... Is it pain?
What gain do i get from feeling so happily in vain...
hmmm...
Dangerous..
And that which i grab at, that freedom which i so selfishly crave..
If i were to control this.. It would take destruction of me to cave...
I would not damage..... only make things turn my direction...
But the soul is a powerful thing.. Its strength beats me in election..
With precision............. He takes aim carfully with the bow of magic..
To have one wish would be to happily ever have it..
Have that feeling of insane morality, of loose decision..
Making the right choices on reflexed fear of wrong incisions...
Like a dream..
Now so simple.. I weave away from responsibility.. Put it out..
Leaving all emotion behind - just to carry this one about...
So leaden on my life;.......... so light to my head...
So heavily fragile, One slip and i may aswell be...
This is my sunset..
My only last desire.. to have this driving force.. Create my fire..
For me, i never knew it existed.. Heart for hire.. no longer...
This girl, this love, this addiction together... Created my life..
My biggest strife... Is that i hold on to this girl Jess,
The girl my life stays so strong for.
I envision.......... The Death of Liams thoughts for one...
That object's given feelings make him feel so immortal... and gone..
With quick revision.. he decides he needs to grab his moments..
Make it last - like the sun, never let anybody else own this.
With precision............. He takes aim carfully with the bow of magic..
To have one wish would be to happily ever have it..
Have that feeling of insane morality, of loose decision..
Making the right choices on reflexed fear of wrong incisions...
I love you Jess.
Critique this maturely and responsibly please.. My first OM. I know it sounds kinda poetic, but thats the feel im going for.. Read it like a poem but keep in mind its a rap.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...=1#post3214137
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...40#post3214140