Never recieved

[HaZy]

spiraling down down down

Tomorrow sits in an ebony painted chair
glistening drops of babys breath glimmer from her blood stained hair
Forever lays upon a field of burnt marigold
swollen eyes produce her very first tear from the last story told
Future bent and broken stands holding the sin on another
repenting athiest screams we speak among eachother
Always dreams of brighter whites and loving hands once held
reading the script of hatred in a lovers tormented mind

Present

Presentsits with her wings misshapen
her hair tangled
her face battered
her frail body starven
her dress bloodstained
eyes closed
heart still
pulse gone

Present had Alwayswished for a FutureBut Forever she was denied untill Finally Tomorrow never came......

[!.VeRbZ.!]

nice peice....felt the imagery.....complexity was there...creativity was lacking......but overall good peice man keep up the good work...

[*Jazzmine*]

dam, what da fuck was this shit? come on now, the structure was way off and the title was aight nahmean but your vocab was down hill and should have added more shit to it to make it understandable, the way its written misleads people who read it.

[mad linx]

ur shit was lame

[*Jazzmine*]

damMM salty he shitted on her like that. home gyrl just needs improvement

[mad linx]

ill battle u cuz u sound like u suck

[*Jazzmine*]

who are you talking about like that?.

[waterflow]

Fucked The Hatas Haze All Ur Shit Is Hot Peps Always Talkin Bout The Form The Structure The This The Thats But Never Realize The True And Authentic Quality That Was Hot Keep The Fire Burnin

[HaZy]

thanks water

and what teh hell is this freepost anonymous crap