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I revised some of it, I wrote the first one quite quickly within 10 minutes so it died off but here you go..On this part i decided to keep the same rhyme scheme going througout the whole verse i like this alot better.

I Still got work from the ~A.M. to the P.M.~
I Still got work from ~Day out to the day in~
You think that im ~Playin?~ I'll ~Show you that im not~
Ill show you how to turn raw ~Coke into the rocks~
2 Parts soft white, put the ~Potion in the pot~
I gave them Fiends that shit that they ~Tokin in the drop~
But I always made sure i never ~Sold em to the cops~
Now thats the defintion of ~Holdin down the block~
And its always gonna say ~Rolley on my watch~
As long as crackheads stay ~Smokin on the rocks~
Watch me, as the rhymes is ~Rollin off the top~
You a pawn in this game You betta ~Go back to ya spot~
I Should slap them dudes that ~Told em that they Hot~
Talkin all of that, when they ~Knowin that they Not~
Matta fact, Give em 2 me i'll ~Show em that they not~
I Guess they just won't stop until i'm ~Blowin off they top~
Holla!

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