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  1. #1
    JDP000109
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    Problem Child

    Links..
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...40#post3226540

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...51#post3226551

    Verse 1

    Im crazy in the brain, im shady and ~de-ranged~
    Growin up how i was raised its hard to ~remain sane~
    My ~motha trippin' on me~ and my ~brotha Pickin' on me~
    The kids at school fucked wit me til i ~started swingin' on em~
    I Was fuckin kids up and scrappin in the ~bathrooms~
    Startin smokin weed, doin coke, and takin ~mad shrooms~
    It effected my grades and my ~mind so fell back~
    i wised up, looked at the weed and said ~why dont i sell that?~
    Had no mentor, i introduced my ~self to this game~
    Loved 2 rob, but my friends was ~sellin that caine~
    D was the dealer and i was the ~stickup kid~
    Dorian got caught slippin and he ended up wit ~15-10~
    Neva fucked with crack, but i was sellin ~weed and ex~
    But what you expect, from a kid that was raised on ~DMX~
    Mook moved, tony moved, cody moved, ~i stayed~
    My only real dawg in the hood left was de~vondre~

    Hook x2
    I WAS RAISED AS A PROBLEM CHILD
    WILIN OUT, BUT NOW IM CALMIN DOWN
    IM ROBBIN NOW, SLIP UP LET THE 9 COME OUT
    CUZ IM A MUTHA FUCKIN PROBLEM CHILD
    I WAS RAISED AS A PROBLEM CHILD
    GET PAYED LIKE A PROBLEM CHILD
    GET BLAZED LIKE A PROBLEM CHILD
    PLEASE PRAY FOR THIS PROBLEM CHILD!

    Verse 2

    Carried knifes to school, packed guns on the ~outside~
    Seen a dope fiend on my front lawn commit ~suicide~
    When Blade died, i ~lost my breath~
    I couldnt believe it man i loved his ~ass to death~
    Boss up and get this money those are ~words of the wise~
    He just finished blood sweat and ~tears then he died~ (R.I.P.)
    Rumors get spread, then they ~turn into lies~
    Some ppl you thinks ya dawgs are just ~birds in dusguise~
    Round here shits gettin ~hot on the block~
    You cant even walk around witout gettin ~stopped by the cops~
    They give me shit, harass ~me on a daily basis ~
    Say im gettin loud and i aint ~even say shit~
    When Pac died i was too young to ~understand~
    How a man can just str8 up kill ~another man~
    But now its like fuck it human ~life aint shit~
    Thats how everybody is, somebody needs to ~right this shit!~

    Hook x2

    Verse 3

    There was a point in my life i was like ~fuck all this stress~
    I Aint give a shit about my life or give a ~fuck how i dressed~
    I Was a problem child who didnt ~want no help~
    It was Get Money and hoes fuck ~everyone else~
    I Seen a 1 on 1 fight then 4 more people ~came out~
    Dude shanked one of em 9 times left his ass ~layed out~
    Middle school girls was gettin pregnant at ~13~
    Plenty Brendas in my hood thats how it ~works see~
    A Kid get pregnant, the ~mom get pissed~
    She dont get an abortion, get kicked ~out the crib~
    In my school, kids got caught with ~knifes and guns~
    I sold weed in school but im beggin god to ~right my wrongs~
    Just to get by homies is sellin ~coke in the ghetto~
    I Took the easy route and i sold my ~soul to the devil~
    He look out for me and he ~hold me down~
    I known him for years he more than just my ~homie now!~

    Hook x2


    Feedback Please!

  2. #2
    JDP000109
    Guest
    Uppin', Don't sleep on this!!!

  3. #3
    Uncensored
    Guest
    it was good lyrically but your transitions need workand in the 2nd verse you got off topic.

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