Godz Illusion - Wait

[Godz Illusion]

Hey lil moma let me show you how i preform in the cama
my dick is the "Dalai Lama" won't you put your hands on him
whenever you have a problem my dick can always sovle them
doing tricks like the harlem globetotters
i never go soft i just keep getting harder
i cant help if my dick keeps gettin' larger
my dicks the battery and your pussy's the charger
i don't mean to bother but let's make it hotter
make your body rock like a teter-toter
have you yelling out postions like if you were coach carter
got both of your legs wrapped around my head
got you busting all over my bed you heard what i said
i love leaving your pussy bright red you never had your pussy this wet
love making you sweat baby there aint no time for rest
got you waiting for what ima do next
but baby you just gotta wait till you see my.....

[.Vendetta.]

Meh Okay Piece Man Vocabulary Was Some What Good Decent Flow Not Really All That Here But You Cool, Structure Need's Some Work Here, Spice Up Your Rhyme Scheme Man, And Work On Your Lines Make It More Estinguished And Shit Naw I'm Saying..No Hate.

[JDP000109]

It was str8, but i think you could do better.
The bars were too basic and alot of the words didn't fit too good.
The bars also seemed stretched out.
I see room for improvment but stay up!

[Godz Illusion]

good look ya'll im working on more serious lyrical shit this was just a fun song but thanx 4 the comments ima be working on my flaws good looks keep the comments coming thanx

[Uncensored]

was this your version of the whisper song cuase if it is it would go perfectly with the song but you stretched it out too much

[Godz Illusion]

yeah this is my verision of the whisper song

[Godz Illusion]

more comments please