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Thread: My 1rst song

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    My 1rst song

    Yo u run like u got some to lose
    ur drunk on to much booze
    u try to diss me like 50 all cause i told him his mom is shity
    a rap better than swifty from d twizzy
    and know Em is pissed cuz I told him he never had a dad to live with
    then i gave out the info that Dre likes to do homos
    but he plays with yoyos but got to go dont for get that 50s a homo

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    srry i dont have a lot of time i will do somthing better later

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    yo no offense but this shit kinda sucks y u hatin gay people, dre, 50, and em if it wasnt for people like dre rap wouldnt be wat it is tody and u sound like a homophobic who r usally gay themsevles i rep the bloodz to and cali but plz work on ya game

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    y u dissed dre 4? i can understand 50 and eminem fell off a while back but y dre?

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    its wack work on ur wordplay 2 basic the om min is 16 lines and afta that u have 2 drop 2 links so it wont close......but ELEVATE!!!!!!!!1

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    Man,
    That rhyme was wak,
    Dre read it he'll give ya an all out attack,
    Ya lack defences,
    He see ya and ya kiss his tek, with which he blow ya teeth like a dentist.
    Don't ever rhyme again,
    Ya probably get raided in ya den,
    We street soldiers not scarred of ya bitch ass men,
    50 got nine, but when ya see him he'll probably give ya 10.
    So i betta mention,
    Do a robbery stay in police detention,
    ya'all be safe there,
    Lak, you can't hide elsewhere,
    And ya can't beat me, so ya betta prayer.
    Come rhyme again it's a open dare,
    Let's see how this time ya fare.
    (Laughing)

    next time right something dope and you won't get criticts, Remeber respect is earned.
    Kiss me through the camera lens.
    TNL

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