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    * My Forever *

    I ask you To Understand im Leaving the Past
    Believe me, My Forever ill Always Come back.
    I ask you To Understand im Leaving the Past
    Believe me, My Forever ill Always Come back.

    Strike A match in the Dark, Thats When Passion Sparks
    Like Long Walks and Talks Heart to Heart Under Stars.
    Nothing, but Space Apart to Seperate the Days ...
    Between Here and Then, From who You' Have became
    from who Were back When, I - Do anything To name
    My Friend Forever, Again My Forever - my Friend.
    People Change Over Time to Describe Life Ink expressed
    Extend my Hand Against the Sand in a Sence I Sketched
    An Angels Face Inside Tears Kept Water Drenched Except
    Her Eyes Lit are Like Skys Diamond Kept silent
    Suggests
    Horizons will Shine through Hard Times,
    Its Best Said In Life. Beauty isn't Hard To Find
    If yOu Look Close Inside Someones Soul Through the Eyes.
    You'd Know what Ive been Seein. don't regret,
    The Time and Reasons Why.
    Jus Respect these Words Meant More sense to me It's Like.
    I'd Sweat Before i Bleed my Heart it Seems.
    when this dream ends.I'd Awake to Be in you're Arms.
    Forever is always, never be Again. Forever and On.

    I ask you To Understand im Leaving the Past
    Believe me, My Forever ill Always Come back.
    I ask you To Understand im Leaving the Past
    Believe me, My Forever ill Always Come back.
    Last edited by The EYEV of Life; October 1st, 2005 at 07:21 PM

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    Slept on? someone..

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    ......liked it ill edit with honest feed later on in the day

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    This was a good peice.....i was feelin the imagery.....complexity lacked a bit.....creativity was str8 name fitted title............well....str8 job....cud of increased complexity but besides that ery thing was okay man..........uh keep dropping.....ima be lookin out for more peices from u .......and go hit up ma poem Brotherly-Love

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