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    "Nightmares of a Fanstasy"

    Mami started out nice/
    was hard to get her 7 digits/
    the first go round like a game of dice/
    so I played my cards right/
    repositioned my life/
    hoping one day I might have her in my life/
    but ma started saying im trif/
    cause my lips stayed closer to the mic/
    than the lips in her private life/
    so I had to take her/
    somewhere private "right?"/
    where no eyez can sight/
    cause at this point my lies to bright/
    in my mind I did her right/
    she changed my life/
    she that special material type/
    made for the title of "wife"/
    so I gave her the ice/
    in return "no response"/
    she just gave me a knife/
    that my ribs feed on for the rest of the night/
    so much for the lovely life/
    and I was thinking bout havin kidz/
    but it's hard to have sex wit a pair of bruised ribs/

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