The inbetweens of Love

[angelfromhell]

if i love let not in love my eyes be blind
if i love let not in love my heart be weak
if i should love do not permit it rule my mind
nor if i love allow it to control my speech
for i am a soldier and i will fight long after the war is done..
so if love makes you weak (it is a disease) let my heart be numb
for if i should fall and find i am on rising drunk with love, weak at knee
and blind 2 truth, how will i think,fight or see?
tell me this.

If u know nothing of me-know this
i will not go quietly into that dark abyss
and if u will not know it.............then be your greater foolishness

[!.VeRbZ.!]

i saw what u were tryin to do.....it was coo.....like the imagery.....str8 up creativity........complexity was there but cud of been better.....basically good......just increase complexity and ull be fine........id like to see more peices from u in the future...

[!.VeRbZ.!]

yo homie go check out my ......peice(Don't Tell Me)............aight...1

[The EYEV of Life]

This is unstructured beauty at its best, from a poetic standpoint i applaud with my Pen dripping as the satisfaction is heard and understood. nice work - get to me sometime

[angelfromhell]

uppin ....................................

[angelfromhell]

please vote on the battle in my sig as well