ok i need some critique on this so any advice will help
Get your flow extinguished shown by a close extinction..
By the boldest linguist who flows in broken english....
The most distinguished..Impose a boast as king shit..
Compose a vocal linkage..Provoke a total kinship....
Envoke a socail indent..Enrobes a global distance...
control the local misfits..Erode their skulls as infants....
A wrong impulse condition..A raw assult enlisted and drafted. ..
A strong insult commissioned..Get mauled and tossed to pigeons....
A molotov gets pitched in..Just rolled across your kitchen..
Call the boss and get this..Consult adult permission....
A spot to stop and breathe to break the monotony..
I gotta rock the scene so brace in and follow me....
'Clay spits' to 'model beats'..Stay fixed with module feeds..
Vacant economy..Raise in your property....
A lot to watch increase..Stocks and lottery..
Botched monopoly..Boxed in properly!....
Hottest top emcee..Drops and pops ya' seams..
Throttle God's decree..Bottle rocket screams!....
Ancient mythology..Cave scriptures honor me..
Basement society..Greatest commodity....