User Tag List

Showing results 1 to 3 of 3

Thread: Just you

  1. #1
    You've Earned a Custom Title! Syndrome's Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2005
    Location
    H-town
    Age
    35
    Posts
    333
    Battle Record
    6-10

    Just you

    how can you be so mean acting like your some fucking queen//

    well theres the door you fucking whore come back when your the person that i knew once before//

    one that would do any thing for me wouldnt pick a time to be just would//

    so how could you say that you will see me another day when you got other plans, but o... I have to full fill your demands//

    hell i got more loyalty from one of my friends//

    help your self cuz you have lost your fucking mind are you blind//

    your losing me and it's to easy to see why you would be a second thought//

    unless of course you had my credit card cuz you can be fucking bought//

    now didnt you think i could drop you in a blink//

    all you need to do is take a second to think about someone other than your self//

    you make my life a personal hell I would be beter off in jail//

    fuck this trick ass bitch im ready to bail//

    peace now im gone my life has failed//

    If I live another day im sure to prevail//

  2. #2
    Newbie -Realism-'s Avatar
    Join Date
    Sep 2005
    Location
    LouisVille
    Posts
    16
    ...Um, very simple and original....Next time show more creativity and unique style, otherwise, title this as a poetry piece and add more depth....This was too short to add real feedback so use the suggestions to progress......-Realizm-

    To view links or images in signatures your post count must be 50 or greater. You currently have 0 posts.

    ...."Am As Lyte As A Rokk".
    -this explains how heavy the young lady is...

  3. #3
    Banned
    Join Date
    Aug 2003
    Location
    Mifflinburg, PA
    Posts
    6,693
    Battle Record
    12-1
    16 line minimum.

Posting Rules

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •