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    Chicken Soup and Pancakes

    I use to not be able to move the fan base cause I was weak
    But now I got Chicken Soup and Pancakes
    I can remember way back when my thoughts were scattered
    As a little boy playing in the front yard keeping myself from danger
    I've seen stranger situations but I'm pacing with the blessing I'm recieving
    Please believe this is all me in the secret still remains
    I'm hardcore in the brain loosing my mind my conscience against the grain
    Thinking I'm hard the winning objective is distracting to knowing my part
    In this world that has made it substainally hard for a young guy to make it
    In his profession I'm not stressin or ignorant I'm just asking questions
    For what it's worth since birth I've been compared to adolescence
    For the record whats absurd to you is the perfect picture in my presence
    The Chicken Soup and Pancakes is something Grandmother use to give me
    Her remedy for hard times and for starving stomachs
    And striving young minds thats ambitious and inspiration to the summit
    The hand that I'm dealt with is a gift not something for the public
    To know all my business I'm a man with more inventions than Nixon
    In the office or the house cause I'm on the edge with my bosses
    Nobody's kicking me around I don't stand for it.....not your problem
    But be cautious of the verbal murder that I carry in my different voices
    My appearance is a digital screening down in the corporate bunches
    That Chicken Soup done a lot for a struggling guy who's important
    To his family who has faith in his abilities
    When nobody else is thinking of him making moves with his facilities
    Being abstract can sometimes cost ya but taking risk
    Is what got him this far
    The Pancakes gave me adrenaline when it seem like I was running out
    A touch of surp with some butter and a brother to help you clean your plate
    Even when he was late to dinner he was quick to stop us and say grace
    Life is a game in it's prime a bored police officer waiting for a chase
    I guess thats one of the things that makes the U.S so great
    We all feel locked in sometimes caught up in this place
    The features of the land will dazzle your eyes you loose focus in this phase
    But the Chicken Soup and Pancakes
    Is my Grandmothers remedy for such a case

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    i think this was pretty ill good vocab creativity and such.. ur imagination was there and was a good subject good job.. u could have used better multis tho

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    uppin for some feed on this ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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    i unno rhyme scheme was questionable sometimes... didnt really feel like it was going newhere... and i was right... nothin really too creative and the structure and rhyme scheme makes it real hard to even read, get ur game up.

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    cool

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    uppin for somemore feed on this man ya'll dont sleep

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    I'm uppin some more for a little more feed on this

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