Krayawn vs Dyrty-Money

[Krayawn]

10-12 lines
check in and post your verse within 1 hour of your check in time (I'll start my verse after you check in, and you start your verse after you check in = Blind spit or drop)

[Dyrty-Money]

check.............................................

[Krayawn]

working on my verse now - -- - - - -- -----------

[Krayawn]

Pause and photograph me
Cause I'm the best you'd ever see
You false like tall tales, Your thoughts failed
Your 1st line is okay, But all the rest - stale
As if you sat ya'notebook out in the heat
Fuk it, burn the pages cause you suck, you weak
You can't get a win - Dick in your hand
Thats the only way you can have a man beat
Your self - a pussy man wanna be
What more should I say for ya'll to see
Cause he's not worthy at all, no way no how
No game, no flow, no punch, no stlye
They like, we came we seen we vote K - The boy is wild
You like, you love, you learned - You Done wit pal

[Dyrty-Money]

I bout to give this nigga BATTLE WOUNDS cause my PUNCHES r hittin him 1st like SOLDIERS on the FRONT LINES
Give this nigga a DICK and he's quick 2 BLOW like steppin on LAND MINES
Im bout to MELT this nigga's WAX off his CRAYOLA KRAYAWN
his lyrcis must b COLORFUL but ISOLATED the way he's WITH-DRAWN
Were in the same DIVISION but im more RESPECTED like comparin NIKE 2 STARTER
but in the STREETS u couldnt survive a MILE in my S.CARTER
Im a STREET MASON, i still get a HARD-ON when i FLIP them BRICKS
u like a BANK that's always is gettin ROBBED u just TAKEN the LICKS
pay attention when u ANALYZE my rap, i hit with PRECISION
i'll have u seein in a different DIMENSION, alter ur sight like TUNNEL VISION
I aint a rookie with them bullets, make u look like a soda can when i POP ya LID
I made this nigga feel like a NEW BORN the way i just SPANKED THIS KID

[Krayawn]

uppin

[Dyrty-Money]

Uppin Votes 1................................................. ..............

[MoS iLL]

I thought both of these battles were really good, but dyrty had the better punches, Seemed like he was more creative with his verse.

Krayawn, I have seen better from you, I think you just hurried this 1 or something. Wasn't your best.

Dyrty, you are very consistant.....I like your style. I feel it. Good work

V/////dryrty

[Dyrty-Money]

UPPIN VOTES 2...............if u can VOTE PLEASE DO SO HONESTLY

[Krayawn]

Uppin for votes

[Arsenist]

Krayawn what happened dawg u slacked on this one and your opponent easily capitalized.... Dyrty nice job quit that capitalizin shit though

V/Dyrty

[Krayawn]

He came harder .Thats good shit . UPPIn

[word perfect.]

this was apretty good battle .............................. its hard right now i dont know who won , i know how im feeling more so im going into the break down .......

kray _ You false like tall tales, Your thoughts failed
Your 1st line is okay, But all the rest - stale
nice.................

As if you sat ya'notebook out in the heat
Fuk it, burn the pages cause you suck, you weak
You can't get a win - Dick in your hand
Thats the only way you can have a man beat

not bad for a sucky verse but this stuff is prety played ..

Your self - a pussy man wanna be
What more should I say for ya'll to see
Cause he's not worthy at all, no way no how
No game, no flow, no punch, no stlye
They like, we came we seen we vote K - The boy is wild
You like, you love, you learned - You Done wit pal

the thing thats worst about this is he had style he had flow adn punches ...


dirty. I bout to give this nigga BATTLE WOUNDS cause my PUNCHES r hittin him 1st like SOLDIERS on the FRONT LINES
Give this nigga a DICK and he's quick 2 BLOW like steppin on LAND MINES
stretched and so so


Im bout to MELT this nigga's WAX off his CRAYOLA KRAYAWN
his lyrcis must b COLORFUL but ISOLATED the way he's WITH-DRAWN
tight

Were in the same DIVISION but im more RESPECTED like comparin NIKE 2 STARTER
but in the STREETS u couldnt survive a MILE in my S.CARTER
i like ...

Im a STREET MASON, i still get a HARD-ON when i FLIP them BRICKS
u like a BANK that's always is gettin ROBBED u just TAKEN the LICKS
i wasnt sure whre the diss was in this one he loose alot or something ??? meh .


pay attention when u ANALYZE my rap, i hit with PRECISION
i'll have u seein in a different DIMENSION, alter ur sight like TUNNEL VISION
an this is statement , although a good one .

I aint a rookie with them bullets, make u look like a soda can when i POP ya LID
I made this nigga feel like a NEW BORN the way i just SPANKED THIS KID

its a very close battle but as im so honest i ahve to say that im giving this one to money his punches are harder , but watch the statements structure was tiny strectched crayon had some nice structure but it was to poetry not battle style really but whatever floats your boat , mines honest votes money ... gets mine out

[Krayawn]

Thanks for voting . 2 more .. Or if I'm lucky. 5 more..

[Dyrty-Money]

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