I read this and was bored through out, just wasn't enough to grab my attention. Not to mention a couple of bars were thrown in randomly and just brought the piece down.
A lot of time on my hands, a lotta rhymes on my hand
Cause they wont give me a pad for some reason im mad and uneven
So this guy on death row is a rapper? Lol it's just so corny.
I have to keep my mind state strong like the spine of a man
It was the only thing i could fufill cause crime was a plan
Human's spines are actually very sensitive, hence people becoming parapalegic when hurting their spine in a certain way. Also sounds like cheap forced rhyme scheme.
Anyway, keep writting, hope you don't take my opinion too hard because you should write to please yourself. I could have came in here and said a bunch of shit that don't matter and been like "nice piece", but I don't like lying.