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[Phillup Caskets]

I can hear the loud crash as my heart hits the floor
I watch as it shatters into peices of my past love
Crys of pain shoot threw my body bringin me to my knees
As my tears roll down my cheeks and dissapear into thin air
Your sadness is my cryptonite like a gun to my heart
You release the trigger and the pain pulses threw me
Im dieing inside, you wont speak to me, it hurts
I long for your voice as my body decays to nothing
Healing words would stand me up and wipe the tears from my face
But you just spit on my broken heart and dig my grave deeper
Im closer to the edge of insanity, almost over the line
One more push and it will happen, Ill fall, never to stand
My death will bring ease to my strained soul
As I am to be forgotten in my lost loves eyes.

[HaZy]

crys of pain line is where i actually clicked this this peice i felt that that specific line was per say 'the plot' of the piece

But you just spit on my broken heart and dig my grave deeper
^^^

bastards...

seems like when your down theres ALWAYS someone there to push you just one inch deeper down in the dirt

goodline realistic peice overall decent theme

7-10 hazy

[Phillup Caskets]

uPPIN FORE FEED

[Phillup Caskets]

Uppity Duppity

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[!.VeRbZ.!]

nice peice felt the imagery creativity was fine......complexity was good cud of been better but good ...keep it up ill be looking for more peices from u....oh yeah and i also liked how the title matched the peice...and go hit up ma peice honestly its intitled Brotherly Love

[Phillup Caskets]

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