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Thread: Blinded By Rage Pt.1

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    mc FireSt0rm
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    Blinded By Rage Pt.1

    i got a beast within callin ma name ,
    but evrytime it's unleashed it causes just pain ,
    im tryna keep it in lyk im tuggin a ghostly mane ,
    but the fact still, remains tht it puts complexity in2 da game
    im tryed 2 tell da dr at the weekend,
    but the dr jus comin round they say hes on the mend,
    but i dunno wot comin next round this misty bend ,
    BLINDED BY RAGE i puttin my soul into this page,
    cuz im manageing 2 let it all out up on the stage fuk u mom,
    u sed u wudent be gone long but the rage tellin me u got it all rong,
    dad sed u wer probably dead but u werent, u werent there 2 put us 2

    bed,
    now im riting this note b4 i fill sum1 up wit this lead,
    bullet holes quick sum1 call him a fed and a medic mamma dont,t cry u

    dont think this rhyme is irredit..ory,da glory of unleashing this

    fury,
    the question is am i eva gonna finish this story.
    cuz im lyk a eagle, soaring high above the feeble,
    cuz i finnally lettin lose but im hiding in steeples,
    a holy place , my base until i get a nu face cuz tis is a race b4 the

    court case,
    is this my place in the world shootin the innocent,
    i onli dreamt i cud lower the rent now there feds at my house i don't

    no wot to do...
    ino ill pop myself off wit sum purple & blue...

    please give feed back

  2. #2
    mc FireSt0rm
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    how du8 u gety link i onli joined yestaday

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    just leave the persons name and title of the piece,

  4. #4
    mc FireSt0rm
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    mc firest0rm
    blinded by rage Pt 1

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