Topic: Ya City
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Topic: Ya City
16 or more lines-NO LESS
no crew voted
no d/r votes
check in 10 min
DUE by 9 pm RB time....
good luck
dis is my check by da way........check
ooooo Reppin T.O *does backflip*... lol ya checkin in
Toronto the city with projects, bums and even the powerful N rich
Acommadates every culture, religion, and attitude making it a niche
High business buildings with shiney glass making downtown well known
Unknown to natural disasters and to its greatness actors are shown
Comming to this cement jungle..
......................For its unstopping good times, multiple things to do
Buy high priced shoes, take ur kids to the toronto zoo..
.................................................. Or even see a big movie preview
Sports teams with greats form generations as far back as most can remember
And crews who chill mayb commit some crime but never ditch a member
Full blown snow storms during december causing a white christmas
Love being shown publicly, couples who are not scared to show their bliss
No school cause of snow days..
And snowball fights spotted almost every hour or mayb more frequently
People having fun, showing their happy expressions thru art and industry
B-ball courts and hockey rinks..
........................Being played on by anyone who likes the sport
Different skill levels geting together in a friendly game and all other sorts
Guns and violence in certain areas..
...........But innocent pedestrains always protected by the police
Neighbourhood watches and others helping to keep the streets neat
Rep toronto shit why would i have to, just think of its reputation
Called the best in canada because it allows homosexual relations
Laws and bills passed to help the citizens not block their views
Like if u were grounded, cause ur views would be less then two
Freedom of speach except for hatred towards other cultures
Protecting rights, responsibilities...
Not waiting for someone to mess up so they can pounce like vultures
Fuck it rep Toronto.. Nah it reps its self...
If there was a trophy for best around, we'd have it on our shelf
lol thought id do it quick caus ei got to peace soon...shit was harder then i thought but goodluck
dat shit was decent...yeah it was harder than I thought too but here goes....
PA all day from da city of STEEL
Where da block stay hot and snitch niggaz get killed...4 real
Where girlz forced to grow up before dey time
and da dude U called ya nigga...now smoke and get high
Shit be sad sometimes but it's still my home
And I'mma always come back here no matter where I roam
Grew up in da Jets of East Hills - still thugged out
Visions of comin up & seeing my niggaz brains blowed out
Where niggaz get money and da clubs be live
Where I could cop greenery and know it'll get me high
Where Bettis, Ward, and all da STEELERS call dey home
where deres so much undiscovered talent-man shit be wrong
PGH=Pimps gangsta's & Hustlas
and don't sleep cuz our town is small...fake niggaz can't touch us
Got da pittsburgh zoo..where all da kidz can play
Da science center be a good place to spend ya day
Best football stadium handz down yeah ....Heinz field
Da Waterfront where we got spots for some time to kill
Da improv comedy club bringing all types of comics
Where we had a freestyle made up bout our city by Common
Where da 1st black baseball team generated {Pittsburgh Crawfords}
And where names like Marino, Dorsett, Martin & Mel Man originated
Damn....dat was hard but good luck .....uppin
this was an ok battle but i think visionz took it with beta structure and wordplay...blessed u did decent with representin ur city but it was not as deep and visual as visionz was........both did ur thing
im dope.
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WOW them were both hot
Diabolic- I liked how u described ur town..It was like i could pic it in my head, U was good
Blessed- U kept ur lines short and simple, but u made ur point..I was really feelin it
V/Blessed
i agree, both was hot.
never been in either city, but that was like a tour...
Visionz was deep, and meaningful like a story narrator.
But Blessed had more of a "keepin it real" feel.
lol coo rep ur city is good thing not all the crime :P but ya thanks for the feed
blessed ur verse was hot
I thought visionz took this one easy, his was longer and more consisten with decent multis, good structure imagry and vocab. Blessed tongue is elevating i think you have improved a lot since youve got here, you almost took this one.
Please end this battle someone all i need is one last vote.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=233476
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well i was feeling visionz a lil more
he had more structure.
lady blessed verse was simple
visionz had some good barz
he explained his city more
almost feel like he talking bout my city lol detroit
V/visionz
Thanx for all de feedback yall...uppin 4 votes on dis
i'ma hafta go with visionz verse on this...blessed - your verse was nice and explained your city well and all..only visionz went deeper in thought for his verse..his vocab was more complex as well as his rhyme scheme and flow..the imagery was consistent in both verses, but visionz depicted his with more emotion...this was a great topical battle imo..but my votes for visionz for stronger vocab, complex flow, and excellent imagery (the vocab helped with that)..
please vote honestly in my battle..it needs closing:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=229437
Visions...nice shit...I know not everyting in Toronto is good dude..lol Get some emotion and sadness in ya rhymes to make the audience feel for ya...Kind of what blessed did but he could've extended the lines and made it better...bless you had some good shit but your vocab was very limited...you need some better shit dude...Not a good topic...not much to get emotional about here...Your city isn't really something everyone feels for... some people I guarentee care less about "YOUR" cities...but it's good...visions good shit....blessed...NO...elevate..
V/Visions for better vocab...work on the emotion homes...
uppin............................................. ....
uppin............................4 votes...........................