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  • Diabolic Visionz

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  • blessedtongue

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Thread: Battle: Topical: REP YO CITY!!!

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    Do I know You....
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    Battle: Topical: REP YO CITY!!!

    Topic: Ya City
    16 or more lines-NO LESS
    no crew voted
    no d/r votes
    check in 10 min
    DUE by 9 pm RB time....

    good luck

    dis is my check by da way........check

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    Diabolic Visionz
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    ooooo Reppin T.O *does backflip*... lol ya checkin in

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    Diabolic Visionz
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    Toronto the city with projects, bums and even the powerful N rich
    Acommadates every culture, religion, and attitude making it a niche
    High business buildings with shiney glass making downtown well known
    Unknown to natural disasters and to its greatness actors are shown
    Comming to this cement jungle..
    ......................For its unstopping good times, multiple things to do
    Buy high priced shoes, take ur kids to the toronto zoo..
    .................................................. Or even see a big movie preview
    Sports teams with greats form generations as far back as most can remember
    And crews who chill mayb commit some crime but never ditch a member
    Full blown snow storms during december causing a white christmas
    Love being shown publicly, couples who are not scared to show their bliss
    No school cause of snow days..
    And snowball fights spotted almost every hour or mayb more frequently
    People having fun, showing their happy expressions thru art and industry
    B-ball courts and hockey rinks..
    ........................Being played on by anyone who likes the sport
    Different skill levels geting together in a friendly game and all other sorts
    Guns and violence in certain areas..
    ...........But innocent pedestrains always protected by the police
    Neighbourhood watches and others helping to keep the streets neat
    Rep toronto shit why would i have to, just think of its reputation
    Called the best in canada because it allows homosexual relations
    Laws and bills passed to help the citizens not block their views
    Like if u were grounded, cause ur views would be less then two
    Freedom of speach except for hatred towards other cultures
    Protecting rights, responsibilities...
    Not waiting for someone to mess up so they can pounce like vultures
    Fuck it rep Toronto.. Nah it reps its self...
    If there was a trophy for best around, we'd have it on our shelf


    lol thought id do it quick caus ei got to peace soon...shit was harder then i thought but goodluck

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    dat shit was decent...yeah it was harder than I thought too but here goes....

    PA all day from da city of STEEL
    Where da block stay hot and snitch niggaz get killed...4 real
    Where girlz forced to grow up before dey time
    and da dude U called ya nigga...now smoke and get high
    Shit be sad sometimes but it's still my home
    And I'mma always come back here no matter where I roam
    Grew up in da Jets of East Hills - still thugged out
    Visions of comin up & seeing my niggaz brains blowed out
    Where niggaz get money and da clubs be live
    Where I could cop greenery and know it'll get me high
    Where Bettis, Ward, and all da STEELERS call dey home
    where deres so much undiscovered talent-man shit be wrong
    PGH=Pimps gangsta's & Hustlas
    and don't sleep cuz our town is small...fake niggaz can't touch us
    Got da pittsburgh zoo..where all da kidz can play
    Da science center be a good place to spend ya day
    Best football stadium handz down yeah ....Heinz field
    Da Waterfront where we got spots for some time to kill
    Da improv comedy club bringing all types of comics
    Where we had a freestyle made up bout our city by Common
    Where da 1st black baseball team generated {Pittsburgh Crawfords}
    And where names like Marino, Dorsett, Martin & Mel Man originated

    Damn....dat was hard but good luck .....uppin

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    this was an ok battle but i think visionz took it with beta structure and wordplay...blessed u did decent with representin ur city but it was not as deep and visual as visionz was........both did ur thing
    im dope.
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    WOW them were both hot

    Diabolic- I liked how u described ur town..It was like i could pic it in my head, U was good

    Blessed- U kept ur lines short and simple, but u made ur point..I was really feelin it

    V/Blessed

  7. #7
    DATBOIP
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    i agree, both was hot.
    never been in either city, but that was like a tour...

    Visionz was deep, and meaningful like a story narrator.

    But Blessed had more of a "keepin it real" feel.

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    Lethal Injection
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    lol coo rep ur city is good thing not all the crime :P but ya thanks for the feed
    blessed ur verse was hot

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    I thought visionz took this one easy, his was longer and more consisten with decent multis, good structure imagry and vocab. Blessed tongue is elevating i think you have improved a lot since youve got here, you almost took this one.


    Please end this battle someone all i need is one last vote.

    http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=233476

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    APRIL76765
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    well i was feeling visionz a lil more
    he had more structure.
    lady blessed verse was simple
    visionz had some good barz
    he explained his city more
    almost feel like he talking bout my city lol detroit
    V/visionz

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    Thanx for all de feedback yall...uppin 4 votes on dis

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    NuM-WuN
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    i'ma hafta go with visionz verse on this...blessed - your verse was nice and explained your city well and all..only visionz went deeper in thought for his verse..his vocab was more complex as well as his rhyme scheme and flow..the imagery was consistent in both verses, but visionz depicted his with more emotion...this was a great topical battle imo..but my votes for visionz for stronger vocab, complex flow, and excellent imagery (the vocab helped with that)..

    please vote honestly in my battle..it needs closing:
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=229437

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    Visions...nice shit...I know not everyting in Toronto is good dude..lol Get some emotion and sadness in ya rhymes to make the audience feel for ya...Kind of what blessed did but he could've extended the lines and made it better...bless you had some good shit but your vocab was very limited...you need some better shit dude...Not a good topic...not much to get emotional about here...Your city isn't really something everyone feels for... some people I guarentee care less about "YOUR" cities...but it's good...visions good shit....blessed...NO...elevate..

    V/Visions for better vocab...work on the emotion homes...

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    Diabolic Visionz
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    uppin............................................. ....

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    uppin............................4 votes...........................

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