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Thread: Introducing EmaQulate (KeyStyle No Topical) First Drop

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    Arrow Introducing EmaQulate (KeyStyle No Topical) First Drop

    A Experimental Accidental wit incidental fundamentals//
    wit immaculate dialect to intense for the fucking pencil//
    an emcee wit the power to inspire-fans n retire-bands//
    cat's claimin they "Break Mic's?", bitch i break Entire-Hands//
    wit inderect fire clan's spitting fire undirectional//
    just to feel adreanilan wit intellegence but not to mention-flow//
    better submit or quit cuz my flow is divine n sick//
    "Cannibal Excorcists" eating my own hands possesing cats having ure "MINDS" at my "FINGER-TIPS"//
    no time to bring-your-scripts cuz i got that shit dat'l sting-ya-wits//
    wit defined permits that make you "Think Twice" about dissin Q like "Re-Minding Kids"//
    my flow's dope laced how da "pattern's" allways "Ex-Plain Form"//(explain)
    raise? ive "become "hail/hell" how i "Reign/Rain" in the "Brain-Storm"//
    cross da insane-form den da "Storm" l "Strike permantly" like "Thunder-Branding/cats" cuz Q's not "underground" for a "reason" but still has "Under-Standing Raps"// (understanding)
    Blundered wit flow bizzare like stealing infints wit out sense for repentence//
    Vocal's Murding "Death Row" victims cuz they faced ma "Slaughter Sentence"//

    ayo i need to know what i can do to improve this...^^^^
    or if its good then imma "Free Agent" lol...o and i hope you enjoyed
    and if not then...hey lol o well..tell me waddup doh

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    yo i could tell yuo gots talent homie....you had pretty good lines and multies in that shit...try to even out the lines tho...like:
    blah blah blah blah blah blah
    blah blah blah bnlah balllllljaj
    ^^^you feel me...............
    that would make your structure better and easier to read....dont put nothing in quatations and dont CAPS anything except the first letter in the beginning kuz it makes it NOOBISH like...but other than that your flow was pretty nice and overall a dope drop homie.....just look at others work and elevate from that....

    PS...can you leave feedback on this homie...
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    for a newb that was great ur rhymes came out from nowhere
    keep spitting

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    Needs legit title. no freestyles/Keys

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