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    interrogation 1 ( detective version)

    A mind is a terrible thing to waste on tha real
    I had to learn the hard waz before my appeal
    I waz sentenced to 3 yrs in the pin for robbery
    These fuckin fake cops investagatin botherin me
    The tryin to pump info but I'm not given them shit
    The gotta fuckin kill my ass I'm not goin out like a bitch
    They askin me questions like did I have any affileations
    I said just a couple of ppl I met when I waz RC racin
    I laugh in his face and he punches me directly in the jaw
    There waz blood drippin from my lip and I waz gonna fall
    I waz like Damn cause my jaw waz ringin like a church bell
    If the dude hit me again I'll sent this foney cop to hell
    I waz coughin up blood and the a tooth came out
    Sittin like damn he hit me hard as hell in the mouth
    He waz interrogatin me and up on me hard like white on rice
    Told me if I didn't tell him wut he wanted to hear it's 10 to life
    Sitten like damn that's a long time to be sitten in a cell and rottin
    Not eva gettinm shit good to eat and then my mouth feel like cotten
    He requested that he give me one last option he said
    If u suck my dick I'll make this whole entire case go to bed
    I waz like wut the fuck is wrong wit this dude and my heart waz racin
    Let all u thugs out there know that anything can happen in a interrogation

    To be continued....................................


    we got a guy wit a bad record growin up in poverty
    fuck lets pin his ass wit 3 years for this arm robbery
    lets see if this pussy will squel
    before this little asshole gets his appeal
    c'mon look at him i can tell he crook
    besides he think he got heart cuz he really aint shook
    im tryin to get info but he aint givein shit
    cuz if is peeps found out that makes him look like a bitch
    so i say who was involve wit this arm robbery
    then he said a couple of people thats when i tapped the officer beside of me
    i said i see this little pussy wanna play it raw
    so the dude laugh thats when i punch tha bitch in tha jaw
    thats when i said look lil bitch you gon tell
    by then his shit was probly ringing like church bells
    he coughing up blood then is tooth came out
    so i said c'mon dude let truth come out
    i was on his ass like whit on fuckin rice
    thats when i told his ass you can get 10 on up to life
    i knew that l word in his head start ringing
    and pretty soon like bids in tha moring he start singing
    i can make this case go away how is that he said
    you can get on ya knees and start givein me head
    i can see it in his eyes that his heart was steady racin
    thats how i do these fake thugs in interrogation...............................

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    this wasnt that bad. some good lines here and there. you repeated alot of the same lines in the different versions and it would have been nice to see the same story being told from the different prespective with different vocab and ryhmes. and the cop seemed to be alot more hostile than the armed robbery dude because of the intensy and the swearing so it was good to get a different feel with that. pretty good drop

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    this was good. kindof boring to me though, the topic would've been interesting if oyu would've added more drastic type shit to it. everything was simple, normal everyday shit that every one normally hears about. but it wasn't bad, you had decent rhymes and had decent vocab.

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    You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

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    this wasnt terrible, very simplistic, very basic, lacking alot of elements, but in the first verse you stuck to the topic. not bad yo, keep it real.

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