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  1. September 20th, 2005, 04:25 PM #1
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    Shit To Think About

    yea check this out...right now i'm gonna give you some shit to think about so pay attention.......

    you just lost your job cause your boss is a fuckin slob
    and you are a two time felon so you can't get a job
    so you imagine killing every nigga thats in ur work place
    what if u try and end up wit tha cops all up in ur face
    .....THATS SOME SHIT TO THINK ABOUT.....
    your baby girl just got pregnant and u know it's not yours
    so you break down into tears and fall down on all fours
    then you imagine finding the real daddy and killin his ass
    but what if you try and u end up buried under the grass
    .....THATS SOME SHIT TO THINK ABOUT.....
    you just got evicted and you got nowhere to stay
    so you break into this house to find somewhere to lay
    you go back and imagine wat it's like to lay in a bed
    but wat if the home owner comes home & lays u dead
    .....THATS SOME SHIT TO THINK ABOUT.....
    and ya baby mama left you cause u can't support ur son
    she say's fuck you nigga and gets up walks out and runs
    and you imagine wat if i cared for my son supported his needs
    but it's too late ur girls married and ur son got his own seeds
    .....THATS SOME SHIT TO THINK ABOUT.....
    and when you thinks there's no choice u go into da streets
    but you don't think u fit in and you find nothing but beefs
    and you be talkin shit to the wrong nigga's actin all tough
    and when you get feeled up wit holes u know street's r rough
    .....THATS SOME SHIT TO THINK ABOUT......
    .....(NAH WAIT IT'S TO LATE TO THINK NIGGA REST IN PEACE).....
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  2. September 20th, 2005, 04:27 PM #2
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    ha ah this shit was crazy yo...
    vocab was kinda basic but it was tight ya flow was good and structure of ya verse was well organized... liked how you had anger into it, shows feelings involved in it.....
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  3. September 20th, 2005, 04:32 PM #3
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    links i left feed on:
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  4. September 20th, 2005, 04:36 PM #4
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    Yeah Tech this waz a good drop hommie
    U just need to add more vocab like Ladie say

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  5. September 20th, 2005, 04:50 PM #5
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  6. September 20th, 2005, 04:51 PM #6
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    this was a good piece.But again you need to work on using some emotion in your verse it will make it way better.You had an aight storyline and the Imagry was ok.And you had an ok structure and ok wordplay.Like I say again center your piece it will make it look better.But overall this was good just keep up the good work I'll have more OMs coming in the next couple of days.

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  7. September 20th, 2005, 04:53 PM #7
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    goodjob dude, u had a great flow going, a great structure, great job!
  8. September 20th, 2005, 05:22 PM #8
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  9. September 20th, 2005, 05:47 PM #9
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    and i ain't even pre-write this shit this shit was off da top of my head

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  10. September 20th, 2005, 05:52 PM #10
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    i think you need to up your game a bit, this to me sounded too simple, like sorta not from an experienced writer, id keep at it, the potential's there, but something seems to be missing in my view....
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  11. September 20th, 2005, 05:55 PM #11
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    yea i know i'm just gettin started wit the OM'S they will be betta in da future

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  12. September 21st, 2005, 02:57 PM #12
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    ay yo this was a tight verse.........this is the type of shit that ppl be thinkin about..
    the flow was cool.....the structure was ite.....yeah this was nice....
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  14. September 26th, 2005, 03:02 PM #14
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    Yo, I Like The Way Your Rhymeing Tecnique Was. Pretty Tight Yo, Keep It Up.
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    thanx uppin for more feed i'd like to have feed from vets to see how really good it is

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