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Last edited by Sergio...; September 24th, 2005 at 01:52 PM
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Last edited by Exculptifactoriusness; September 25th, 2005 at 04:53 PM
gauntlet sucked. i wondered how he made finals..that's what's up
but i'm past that...really though, who isn't? that verse was wack as fuck
ya got me pissed, g. if i lose my cool i'll be makin this cat history
so he'll have me up in arms....of the voters carrying me after victory
simply put, i'll beat him dead. i can tell the way ya recent text's soft
Amb's kinda nice...cuz lines aint mean enough to give a decent head a loss
just beating herbs. i'm raggin em on, so sure that i'll rap it in song
we all know you don't belong in HW..so it'll be one match and you're gone
strapped w/ a bomb you'll burn, heated. loser..the world needs it
the same bitch who tried to kill himself when he found that his girl cheated
i mean it, you mild and crappy. the best with it.. sav's style is savvy
Amb's far from legendary...he's GOTTA live a couple thousand miles from Cali
so dream on, b. you aint dope...please, quit trying to scheme on me
this faggot's such a letdown..he makes Evolve's comeback verse seem godly
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ya gassed punk. 5-0 with fluke wins, someone pull around the hearse
cuz ima dead this kid 6 feet deep...& bring his ass back down to earth
Last edited by Sergio...; September 22nd, 2005 at 02:32 AM
"And I feel like an idiot working my day
around a call but when I pick up I don't know what to say"
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Sav winning titles? Not without dickriders, & you got plenty, but kid
Everybody knows that you stay Moron then any of your idiot friends.
You'll probably fill your verse with talk from the finals thread, but see
You should also show people how YOU LOST 2 ROUNDS AHEAD OF ME. Wewillfuckyouup'er? Please, you've got no slack, but it's a fact
That you never would have made the 5th round if it wasn't for Kap.
Let's make this into a movie, cuz it's fiction that your nice herb
I mean, your ego is titanic, & I'm the only one fit to play the iceberg.
But yeah, I've been getting easy comp, it's easy to manage, but please
I was lookin for a challenge this week, ...not to challenge the weak.
& I hear you think your hot? Well son, this is a vital catch
Now you can finally be a model...on how to lose a title match.
There's a difference between us, your more known, & I'm the dunce
Wait a second though,...
...I've been champ twice now, something you've never done once.
But, I must say, you think any of your lines are clever? Played
You've now allowed me to make the easiest money I've ever made.
One of these weeks, I will have time to do a real verse.
Hopefully.
I dunno if you're trying to take a cheap shot at me with
that final statement..but whatever.
Vote peeeeeoooooople
"And I feel like an idiot working my day
around a call but when I pick up I don't know what to say"
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Savir
gauntlet sucked. i wondered how he made finals..that's what's up
but i'm past that...really though, who isn't? that verse was wack as fuck
ok start. lets see how you build on it.Just a jab.
ya got me pissed, g. if i lose my cool i'll be makin this cat history
so he'll have me up in arms....of the voters carrying me after victory
[b]i liked it. wording was good. concept was ok. Pretty good[/b[
simply put, i'll beat him dead. i can tell the way ya recent text's soft
Amb's kinda nice...cuz lines aint mean enough to give a decent head a loss
Ehh. I saw a few of these recently.
just beating herbs. i'm raggin em on, so sure that i'll rap it in song
we all know you don't belong in HW..so it'll be one match and you're gone
Ok.
strapped w/ a bomb you'll burn, heated. loser..the world needs it
the same bitch who tried to kill himself when he found that his girl cheated
Nice personal.
i mean it, you mild and crappy. the best with it.. sav's style is savvy
Amb's far from legendary...he's GOTTA live a couple thousand miles from Cali
Eh.
so dream on, b. you aint dope...please, quit trying to scheme on me
this faggot's such a letdown..he makes Evolve's comeback verse seem godly
Lol. I liked this.
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ya gassed punk. 5-0 with fluke wins, someone pull around the hearse
cuz ima dead this kid 6 feet deep...& bring his ass back down to earth
Nice finish
Overall- You started off ok. Sorta repeated the same thing and had some flips but overall consistent verse. Nice job Sav.
Ambience-
Sav winning titles? Not without dickriders, & you got plenty, but kid
Everybody knows that you stay Moron then any of your idiot friends.
Eh. This had potential. But lacked in delivery. Sorry but a miss.
You'll probably fill your verse with talk from the finals thread, but see
You should also show people how YOU LOST 2 ROUNDS AHEAD OF ME.
But you didn't beat him. So....? Sorry but nah
Wewillfuckyouup'er? Please, you've got no slack, but it's a fact
That you never would have made the 5th round if it wasn't for Kap.
Ok enough. Stop repeating the same thing.. WE GET IT
Let's make this into a movie, cuz it's fiction that your nice herb
I mean, your ego is titanic, & I'm the only one fit to play the iceberg.
Ok.
But yeah, I've been getting easy comp, it's easy to manage, but please
I was lookin for a challenge this week, ...not to challenge the weak.
Ok.
& I hear you think your hot? Well son, this is a vital catch
Now you can finally be a model...on how to lose a title match.
I liked this. Pretty nice.
There's a difference between us, your more known, & I'm the dunce
Wait a second though,...
...I've been champ twice now, something you've never done once.
Ok.
But, I must say, you think any of your lines are clever? Played
You've now allowed me to make the easiest money I've ever made.
Again..we get it..
One of these weeks, I will have time to do a real verse.
Hopefully.
Excuses for a text verse is lame.
Overall- You had one nice line. The rest was sorta bland or just repeating the same thing over and over like your audience is retarded.
Vote- Savir.
Sav...
gauntlet sucked. i wondered how he made finals..that's what's up
but i'm past that...really though, who isn't? that verse was wack as fuck
eh
ya got me pissed, g. if i lose my cool i'll be makin this cat history
so he'll have me up in arms....of the voters carrying me after victory
cool shit
simply put, i'll beat him dead. i can tell the way ya recent text's soft
Amb's kinda nice...cuz lines aint mean enough to give a decent head a loss
not really
just beating herbs. i'm raggin em on, so sure that i'll rap it in song
we all know you don't belong in HW..so it'll be one match and you're gone
not really feelin
strapped w/ a bomb you'll burn, heated. loser..the world needs it
the same bitch who tried to kill himself when he found that his girl cheated
lollll
i mean it, you mild and crappy. the best with it.. sav's style is savvy
Amb's far from legendary...he's GOTTA live a couple thousand miles from Cali
ok
so dream on, b. you aint dope...please, quit trying to scheme on me
this faggot's such a letdown..he makes Evolve's comeback verse seem godly
why was this funny to me lollllll
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ya gassed punk. 5-0 with fluke wins, someone pull around the hearse
cuz ima dead this kid 6 feet deep...& bring his ass back down to earth
ok
amb
Sav winning titles? Not without dickriders, & you got plenty, but kid
Everybody knows that you stay Moron then any of your idiot friends.
kinda forced
You'll probably fill your verse with talk from the finals thread, but see
You should also show people how YOU LOST 2 ROUNDS AHEAD OF ME.
i usually use lines like this lol, so its ok
Wewillfuckyouup'er? Please, you've got no slack, but it's a fact
That you never would have made the 5th round if it wasn't for Kap.
nah
Let's make this into a movie, cuz it's fiction that your nice herb
I mean, your ego is titanic, & I'm the only one fit to play the iceberg.
dont use titanic/iceberg lines
But yeah, I've been getting easy comp, it's easy to manage, but please
I was lookin for a challenge this week, ...not to challenge the weak.
NEVER USE WEEK/WEAK WORDPLAY
& I hear you think your hot? Well son, this is a vital catch
Now you can finally be a model...on how to lose a title match.
coolness
There's a difference between us, your more known, & I'm the dunce
Wait a second though,...
...I've been champ twice now, something you've never done once.
not bad
But, I must say, you think any of your lines are clever? Played
You've now allowed me to make the easiest money I've ever made.
nah
Kinda Close to me but I got sav edgin this one out, amb shit was iight but some played and old ass wordplay fucked em over but it was a pretty cool verse but ...
V/RivaS
plzzzz don't use name plays on me ..
gauntlet sucked. i wondered how he made finals..that's what's up
but i'm past that...really though, who isn't? that verse was wack as fuck
simply put, i'll beat him dead. i can tell the way ya recent text's soft
Amb's kinda nice...cuz lines aint mean enough to give a decent head a loss
just beating herbs. i'm raggin em on, so sure that i'll rap it in song
we all know you don't belong in HW..so it'll be one match and you're gone
strapped w/ a bomb you'll burn, heated. loser..the world needs it
the same bitch who tried to kill himself when he found that his girl cheated
i mean it, you mild and crappy. the best with it.. sav's style is savvy
Amb's far from legendary...he's GOTTA live a couple thousand miles from Cali
so dream on, b. you aint dope...please, quit trying to scheme on me
this faggot's such a letdown..he makes Evolve's comeback verse seem godly
heater for sure... Sav I'm gonna have fun against you homie that was fire for the most part.. def worth reading.
vs
Let's make this into a movie, cuz it's fiction that your nice herb
I mean, your ego is titanic, & I'm the only one fit to play the iceberg.
But yeah, I've been getting easy comp, it's easy to manage, but please
I was lookin for a challenge this week, ...not to challenge the weak.
& I hear you think your hot? Well son, this is a vital catch
Now you can finally be a model...on how to lose a title match.
There's a difference between us, your more known, & I'm the dunce
Wait a second though,...
...I've been champ twice now, something you've never done once.
'clipse you comin nicer now... for sure... you def on your way to bein a threat.. if you write all your own, I respect you man you're decent now.
v/ Sav for bein the mean fire breathin mufucker
ya got me pissed, g. if i lose my cool i'll be makin this cat history
so he'll have me up in arms....of the voters carrying me after victory
so dream on, b. you aint dope...please, quit trying to scheme on me
this faggot's such a letdown..he makes Evolve's comeback verse seem godly
VS
Sav winning titles? Not without dickriders, & you got plenty, but kid
Everybody knows that you stay Moron then any of your idiot friends.
You'll probably fill your verse with talk from the finals thread, but see
You should also show people how YOU LOST 2 ROUNDS AHEAD OF ME.
But yeah, I've been getting easy comp, it's easy to manage, but please
I was lookin for a challenge this week, ...not to challenge the weak.
& I hear you think your hot? Well son, this is a vital catch
Now you can finally be a model...on how to lose a title match.
There's a difference between us, your more known, & I'm the dunce
Wait a second though,...
...I've been champ twice now, something you've never done once.
I'm really not sure what everyone saw...maybe some AIM convos I wasn't privvy to...
But I got Ambience all over this...for the win.
Peace
gauntlet sucked. i wondered how he made finals..that's what's up
but i'm past that...really though, who isn't? that verse was wack as fuck
ya got me pissed, g. if i lose my cool i'll be makin this cat history
so he'll have me up in arms....of the voters carrying me after victory
simply put, i'll beat him dead. i can tell the way ya recent text's soft
Amb's kinda nice...cuz lines aint mean enough to give a decent head a loss
-vs-
Sav winning titles? Not without dickriders, & you got plenty, but kid
Everybody knows that you stay Moron then any of your idiot friends.
You'll probably fill your verse with talk from the finals thread, but see
You should also show people how YOU LOST 2 ROUNDS AHEAD OF ME. Wewillfuckyouup'er? Please, you've got no slack, but it's a fact
That you never would have made the 5th round if it wasn't for Kap.
Let's make this into a movie, cuz it's fiction that your nice herb
I mean, your ego is titanic, & I'm the only one fit to play the iceberg.
But yeah, I've been getting easy comp, it's easy to manage, but please
I was lookin for a challenge this week, ...not to challenge the weak.
& I hear you think your hot? Well son, this is a vital catch
Now you can finally be a model...on how to lose a title match.
There's a difference between us, your more known, & I'm the dunce
Wait a second though,...
...I've been champ twice now, something you've never done once.
But, I must say, you think any of your lines are clever? Played
You've now allowed me to make the easiest money I've ever made.
Sav had a decent verse. But it wasn't no where near as good as Amb's.
Just - Any punch that includes Amb in the Gauntlet is played.
Vote - Ambience
I agree with these two I thought amb came pretty dope but meh ill break it down later
v. amb
Sav, it wasn't a shot at you at all.
I just never seem to have time to write for this.
But good battle nonetheless.
Should be close.
3-3.
Ambs verse was wack, savs verse was wack.
sav wins.
i didnt like ambs verse cuz it just was boring. and sav had some old concepts -
the opener and the far from legendary were both played.
btw amb, stop claiming you never have enough time. its getting old
I don't think either of you tried in this battle. and if you guys did, it sucked. no offense. cuz savir never tries n ambience says he doesnt have time every week.
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