Just let the beat bang… fuck it, fuck it, FUCK YOU

[The Vortex]

I wrote this to a sick beat I just finished making


Check it

I’m speaking 2 all of you via the medium of music
Standing on the podium of champions spitting out this true shit
Got the rap mad tite held in a mantis kung-fu grip
You seeing Tex’ slip… is like having a cold Jamaican summer
I’m ole skool you bitches, I used 2 flow all over funky-drummer
I’m the gunner the front-runner… my verbs stun ya understanding
Never worry bout pain in a fight long as I get a foot or a hand in
Shouting, “FUCK YOU” 2 the screws standing on the prison landing
It’s like when I’m looking into the eyes of all these racist cops
They’re all full of pork-pies…they just wanna put me on lock-
Stuck in the steel box… Living the Life of Charlie Bronson,
Get pissed off; throw tantrums… & hold everybody ransom
For little reason, commit treason in front of the monarchy
Ironically support anarchy: snatching funds from the monopoly
Politically Britain’s a mockery with policies based upon fuckery
Another day another war, fake smile lurks behind number 10 door
It’s a clear-cut truth: Tony Blair couldn’t care for them poor.

Just let the beat bang… fuck it, fuck it, FUCK YOU
Just let the beat bang… fuck it, fuck it, FUCK YOU

Just let the beat bang… fuck it fuck it, FUCK YOU
Just let the beat bang… fuck it fuck it, FUCK YOU

Skilled trooper real story-maker starting the coup sees Noriega
These are hungry times mayne I need cash like Prince-&-Jada’s
The entire system’s under the influence of blemished evil
As covert–agents are acting under orders to vanish people
I’ve been thru darkness so I can understand this deceitful thinking
They call this progress, but as I talk the whole-damn world is sinking
They sponsor Black-on-Black hate Willy Lynch started the Lynching
300 y’rs 2-date, exploiting brainwashing routines strictly for mesmerising
There’s been no sin-free person ever-since the Jesus rising
So how fuck can these mason-laws apply to how im surviving?
Sizing me up for judgement, parliament might say I’m a threat 2 security
And would rather I down my pens and just sink into obscurity
I’m like Hell to the authorities even if the majority is subdued
I don’t prop crime, but what do a man do when he got no food?
Break the Law like Jude or stayed screwed in society
Maybe I should get a job just so sum cunt can fire me
Its str8 hard-times in the gutter these rhymes are my diary.

Just let the beat bang… fuck it, fuck it, FUCK YOU
Just let the beat bang… fuck it, fuck it, FUCK YOU

Just let the beat bang… fuck it, fuck it, FUCK YOU
Just let the beat bang… fuck it, fuck it, FUCK YOU





These Rhymes are my Diary …coming at soon

Haha haha








its over.. are you nuts blood

chu feel me…hahahaha


Vo®tex™ © September 2005

[The Vortex]

links

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=233951
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=233969
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=233148

[The Vortex]

so i guess no props 2day then


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[wyte boy$]

it was aight mayne ok structure and nice wordplay........keep droppin.....

[The Vortex]

thanks for taking a look at least..

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uppn

[The Vortex]

guess 2 moro

[The Vortex]

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[Johnny 6-feet]

Kung Flow doesnt exist any more Vortex, take that out your sig man.

As for the piece, you've been listening to rage against the machine recently haven't you? The subject was well travelled but at least you kept me reading. you used a few decent multi's and your vocab seemed to grow stronger as the piece went on. The hook read like something heavy metal rather than hip-hop. It could be pretty catchy if you spat it to the right beat.

Keep elavating.

[warchild]

I was feeling this piece you seem to hold the same mind state as me.
Well i doubt your as psycho as me but anyway i thought the concept was original, your vocab was good it helped that your imagery was real descripitive and dark so i liked this piece. You mixed the flow up a liitle bit wasnt as nice as your flow in your last verse i read but the piece was still good. The hook would be nice to a real aggresive bass heavy dark beat.
The last two lines of the piece were the dopest lines to me, true shit im unemployed at the moment i dont even wanna work minimum wage is bullshit so i was feeling what you was saying.

Return the feed on my piece please:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=234259

[David Lama]

I read the first few bars, it didnt make me wanna continue to read really, maybe its because Im sleepy so no offense, but it wasnt a bad read, just that you didnt really make the first few bars make me wanna continue I think the first 2 bars should be mad hot ya know? but yea this seemed kinda basic to me. still not bad as I said, and excuse me if I sound harsh but yea keep building. EDIT: just read it again and it wasnt bad, I think I was sleepy lmao. I actually liked the piece. the sick beat you wrote it to what was it so I can hear it while reading it. anyways keep dropping man, pz.

yo can you hit me up with some feedback on this please.

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=233249

[The Vortex]

yo Jonny i had that kung fu in motion in my sig before kung flow was up im kung fu for real ya na mean
thanks for replying anyway...nah i ain listen to rage against the machine.. the hook was more inspired from a black film i watched the other day, sum pimp was spitting, whup that trick in a coarse voice


thanks Warchild ya done know it gets psycho n shit.. maybe we'll do a sick collabo sum time Holl@


thanks Allah.. i know kinder what you saying bout the start, i just kinder wanted to get the flow going coz i wasnt reall y inspired to write anything, i just feel dead sumtimes

The beat i wrote it to i made myself on my bedroom computer.. i'm gonna find out how to rig my audio on the net, and imma Holl@ at yo with the beats fosho

[aSap iLL]

Sorry fam this was not a very good drop..your wordplay and vocab was decent but it could have been alot better..most of your words/wordens were very simple.and it made it seem like a first grader wrote this... your imageyr was blah..not really vivid.. but overall elevate.. and keep it up pz.

[The Vortex]

Sorry fam this was not a very good drop..your wordplay and vocab was decent but it could have been alot better..most of your words/wordens were very simple.and it made it seem like a first grader wrote this... your imageyr was blah..not really vivid.. but overall elevate.. and keep it up pz.

come on bro you got no good reason to b hating on me

show me 1 first grader who can drop like this and get a message accross... i wrote to a beat, hhow many rap songs you ecer heard with much more vocab than this

fuck it you probaly diddnt even read it it properly

so like the chorus says



FUCK YOU


UP

[The Vortex]

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[Dodge]

nah man im liking dis rhyme,i think the word play was quality and the rhyming scheme was off the hook too, overall i would say this is a gd job vortex, i guess another reason why i like it is coz i can relate to it and living near london.hope to see some more gd ones like dis from yah vortex. safe man. Dodge .