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I shudder to the great Father and wonder if he'll let me pass
If i cant make it through, then Satan, smash the lookin glass!
He can't keep me out forever, you see nothing at all lasts
So i'll defy the "great teacher", then return with a "hall pass"
Lash out, and dash past Saint Peter to the golden gate
Peter says he'll be right down, to hold on and told me, "Wait"
This floor's empty, no one's here, is it a good thing he's coming?
But Peter shakes his head, he knew, as if my mind was flooding
My time is due... its excruciating,
To sit and be waiting
For Judgement Day is today, and it's the day to be paying
I hear the hollow footsteps of a lord so great, hopefully humble
My knees started to give away, as if truly about to stumble
Then I saw a figure surrounded by light---radiant and glorious
"Where will i be headed?" he said, " Wait there's more of us"
There stood Jesus, and what? my priest from 3rd grade?
Should i pray or parade around, pretending i'm not afraid?
"You stand here at the gates of heaven wishing to get by,
But I", "And I", "And I think it's not the right time"
They say that God has a plan for us, and in time we will prevail
He put me on the yellow brick road, so how'd i end up in hell?