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Thread: Interrogation part 2

  1. September 11th, 2005, 12:01 PM #1
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    Interrogation part 2

    This cop waz askin me to suck his dick for my bail
    I waz thinkin real hard I ain't no fag but don't wanna go to jail
    Had no choice go away for about ten year or lose my manhood
    Either way I do it the outcome neva gonna be good
    The cop said u got 1 week to give me a reply to my question
    So I went home layed down and got to my restin
    Out of all thing this crooked cop wanted me to do why this
    How the fuckin I gonna call myself a man wit a mouth full of piss
    Then day 2 cam and I asked the cop why u wanted me to do that
    He said after 25 years of confinment u can get used to that
    I waz like damn I'll do anything except for that
    He said got a better idea let me hit it from the back
    I waz like hell no wut kind of fuckin freak are u
    He said somebodys bitch for 25 years and nobody to complain to
    He said all the nigga in there threated me like a strait wussy
    The problem waz I waz lock up at age 15 and neva got no pussy
    A virgin in prison so I went to the opposite sex for some action
    Seein men for 25 years of ur life shit like that happens
    I said if u were in prison for 25 years how the hell u get this job
    I bribed the warden if he hired me he would get a blowjob
    The next day came and like this dude is losin it
    Incarserated at 15 and nuthin men to fuck wit
    That whole week wonderin if there waz a way out of this mess
    I found one way and it had to do wit puttin nutz on my chest
    That day came and I said I'll do it cause I can't to 10 year
    I got to much to live for wit a face full of tears
    He dropped his pants and I got to work to get it ova
    I wouldn't remeber shit cause I went ova the sober
    I knew after that my wife and I would neva have the same relation
    Just cause wut I had to do wit a crooked cop in an interrogation

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  2. September 11th, 2005, 01:00 PM #2
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  3. September 11th, 2005, 03:29 PM #3
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  4. September 11th, 2005, 06:40 PM #4
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  5. September 13th, 2005, 03:17 PM #5
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  6. September 13th, 2005, 04:57 PM #6
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    again this was really good, strcuutre and flow was very smooth and even, easy to read this was a bit longer, i did read all of it though, cuz i've seen part 1 i just had to read part 2, pretty good job on vocab in this one, good job overall, keep it up!
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  7. September 13th, 2005, 05:05 PM #7
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    Thanx

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  8. September 14th, 2005, 05:53 PM #8
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  9. September 15th, 2005, 04:28 AM #9
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    This writting gave the audio a vivid picture of the daily struggle of a convict within the penal system. Flow was descent. However, you need to increase your vocab...

    Descent drop though...
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  10. September 15th, 2005, 04:44 AM #10
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    This was good

    I like the topic for real keeping it true. This got me reading the best thing about this piece was you stayed on topic like you were telling a story. You could of upped your vocab alot and this would of been dope but on the other hand you kept on point all the way through done nicely. piece
    written voices makes hidden noises
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  11. September 15th, 2005, 08:12 PM #11
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    yeah mane, i liked it, it was kinda sick, bout the suckin thing, anyway it was good all round, 9.0/10
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  12. September 21st, 2005, 06:30 PM #12
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  13. September 24th, 2005, 03:55 PM #13
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    like the rest said it flows well and the rhymes were good
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  15. September 24th, 2005, 03:59 PM #15
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    At least read the 1st one 1st ppl

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