Man i like it alot. Is fresh and origional. Like this other dude said, it flowed real well, something hard to do sometimes especially when rolling wit the same topic. you can tell you tought about it alot and put creativity in it. To me it doesnt look like theres anything wrong with it, but it is late so ill try looking at it tomorrow. very nice, its real tight
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Uppin 4 good criticism/comments....
Hey man, this read got my mind thinking, and you dropped some lines that to me..was original shit... same topics as others may have written before...but just you made it sound and rhymed so much better, this drop was dope, and each line flowed to perfection and was smooth... the end lines of freedom of speech took my breathe away...
this line just blew me away, i loved it.. dunno bout tha rest of ya pplz... but dont sleep on this, was a gr8 drop, dope as hell... 9/10... hell good home, elevate on the lenght lol, i'd love to read moreRules are written in stone...idolized just like the perfect topicals
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I'm gunna leave some decent feedback on this but I'm going out for an hour... Thanks for the feed on my OM...
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Np...looking forward to your feedback..nice to hear a veterans opinion every so often..
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