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    Lifes A Bitch

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    Lifes a bitch...things happen that you dont want to..
    People tell you things but..you just hope its untrue...
    Ina split second your life can change at a blink of an eye
    When people wish bad on u & leave u hung out to dry
    I remember my cousin drew...wish he was here till this day
    I remember all the things we did but now it just fades away
    My little cousin Jon was only 10 when his life was taken from me
    Crip'n aint easy thats what he said,i just tell myself his soul was set free
    Jarrett my nucca from way bacc,Why'd you have to rob that house
    Then.....steal that car.....And merk that spouse..
    As for me...i was jumped when i was 13 ,lost my chain and ring..
    I told my nucca's to squad up..and leave not one living thing..
    Loading our rachets we fired at the opposing crew like goin to war
    I saw the guy's who had jumped....me layin on the floor..
    I loaded my gun and fired letting all my anger out on them..
    As the concret squares.........turned into blood red gems...
    I ask my self was it all worth it ? As i sit behind bars...?
    All this just leaves deep imaginary scars..

    Hook
    Lifes a bitch what can i say?...
    Just to take it day by day...
    Everyone knows life is hard..
    But never be taken off guard...

    Spray-Paint
    I should…be taking all the revenge and retribution,
    Devise a plan to exterminate all the mental pollution,
    There’s no time for disillusion, only a lifespan worth of exploring,
    Rather be finding the secrets than opening chests and leave blood pouring,
    Continue enduring, till I find the answer and start curing,
    Myself and everything, fix destiny, and answer death’s luring,
    Where would I be? Provoking thoughts might put me in the cemetery,
    Maybe I’m supposed to be there, easy to get shot by an adversary,
    Random deaths, unnamed bodies in the mortuary,
    Girls getting pregnant more times than they can carry,
    Babies growing up not knowing the face of their daddy,
    Asking themselves the same damn questions, growing up to getting fucked up like Stanley,
    So I’m writing a letter to god asking him these questions,
    Its time I pulled up my boots and stopped this questing, please I’m requesting.

    Hook x2
    Lifes a bitch what can i say?...
    Just to take it day by day...
    Everyone knows life is hard..
    But never be taken off guard...

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    chorus was kinda eh......verses where nice tho....liked your verse just a bit more it just seemed cleaner......straight type shit here....
    Jarrett my nucca from way bacc,Why'd you have to rob that house
    Then.....steal that car.....And merk that spouse..
    lol^^^^

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    i liked this drop...
    very emotiuonal... interestin as well... the flow was tight and i was feelin this all the way.... it was serious also... shows real feelings, and i love the real thing not fake... had a good structure and eveything was hot kepp up the good work ya'll
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    Quote Originally Posted by Dman7467
    Jarrett my nucca from way bacc,Why'd you have to rob that house
    Then.....steal that car.....And merk that spouse..



    lol^^^^
    Is that funny to you !

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    word thanx for the feedback peeps, we appreciate it.....uppin

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    good show by both
    u compliment eachother
    gd flow
    ok structure
    gd wordplay
    work on the hook and the shits cool

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    thanx bam bam......any more feedback?

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    oh hit my piece up taht i just dropped yamean... thanks...http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=230970
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    Bump this for some more feedback please

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    I like it Bone really feelin it
    Structure nice flow nice and wordplay
    All I can say is Keep doin ur thing
    Spray that verse waz ill son u got madd potential
    9/10 overall
    End battle me cuz

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    Nice drop man......you brought good emothion in there.......but the only bad thing was the poor vocab improve that and you will be very good

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    word thanx for the feed peeps........Bump!

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    Bump this.....uppin for some more feedback

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    as an audio peice it was ok.
    the chorus was alright
    I guess it would be better if i heard it since its a song

    I cant say much just by reading it.
    Always Impervious an Axis Power.


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