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    A Random Freeverse

    step up to me bitch and a find ya ass on the ground
    when i tell you to bring to it come around
    you all be hatin on me to get ya rep up
    but when i enter i ain't see none of ye step up
    i have a plan and extensive damage is my aim
    bashing punks and lyrical assinations is my game
    when your careers are dead yall know who to blame

    damage damage i leave your body totally ravaged
    i ain't playin when i rip its gon be savage
    tear you limb from limb at an alarming rate
    i bust in here and like usaul i tend to dominate
    i hear it now please have mercy on me
    me cocking my glock is the last thing you'll see

    step up to me bitch and a find ya ass on the ground
    when i tell you to bring to it come around
    you all be hatin on me to get ya rep up
    but when i enter i ain't see none of ye step up
    i have a plan and extensive damage is my aim
    bashing punks and lyrical assinations is my game
    when your careers are dead yall know who to blame

    demented demented they say i am but fuck it
    i just don't care so bitch on your knees and suck it
    come on please swallow the semen
    choke on the little aids bearing demon
    for one day come on all free std's gallore
    syphilis ,crabs,herpes name it you'll find it on this whore

    step up to me bitch and a find ya ass on the ground
    when i tell you to bring to it come around
    you all be hatin on me to get ya rep up
    but when i enter i ain't see none of ye step up
    i have a plan and extensive damage is my aim
    bashing punks and lyrical assinations is my game
    when your careers are dead yall know who to blame

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    Banned
    Join Date
    May 2006
    Location
    New York
    Age
    34
    Posts
    558
    Battle Record
    10-10
    this was pretty good for a freestyle
    but i think this will get closed for a few reasons
    this had good flow..good rhymes...

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    uppin for more feedback

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