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    Intellect

    Hip hop is like an old man asking for spare change
    across a bare plain dried up so bad that it scares rain
    but it's like we share pain and if despair came we share pain
    my thoughts glide effortlessly like an airplane
    without cash, got a bare frame, need to get rich and wear fame
    people talk it but I do it like a truth or dare game
    fuck what you sow it only matters what you reapin
    keepin peace when speakin
    yet deceasin emcees till they heart ceases beatin
    my only fears- weak rhymes and eternal sleepin
    family weepin, dreamin on my skills when my lungs were breathin
    forever driftin, wishin, never slippin always upliftin
    gifted when it's written, spittin or shittin just listen
    searchin for a path to heaven, God, let me ask some questions
    but first hand me some luck and while you're at it pass a blessin
    was taught an everlastin lesson
    there ain't no passive steppin cuz faith is a massive weapon
    and if a homie falls just catch him
    so with lyrics that lacerate and sever throats
    I advise you to never quote
    cuz like Pac said, this the realest shit I ever wrote
    thirstin for knowledge so I drink water to think harder
    and if I die, let my pen make me an ink martyr
    but I ain't ready yet, my thoughts are heavyset
    while emcees rhymes are anorexic and subject to be neglected
    like a newborn baby with no mother or a romantic with no lover
    ya'll can have hip hop's body, I got the soul of her...

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    ColtYTRecords
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    ayo some lines were much longer than others.. But it was great subjects and great style good shit 8.5/10

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    Ayo, that was a really good piece i thought, it flowed...and was a good topic as said above.... this shit aint been hit up much, so i thought that tha multis were sufficent and was a nice read... not too long, but not too short either... keep droppin n elevatin... jus hit an OM under my sig if u can, and leave sum feed.. that wuld be helpful, thanx man

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