Keystyle

[wordship]

Check it..
Deep In This Jungle
My Heart Turning Harder and Colder..
Arms lifting and Holding all Of The boulders
Cobras Crawling Over yah Shoulders..
Scope wit Attached Gear with Black Goggles//
My Mind Accurate Like Cowboy.s who Buckshots at a Glass Bottles//
its Facts to others it Kinda Strange How ima Sounding
My Soul Trapped Like
Enemys Around My Surroundings..
No Coupes..if i did Have One i,ll Have No Roof But..
Money Hard To Get these days..i,ll Show Proof..
Why Can,t Most Spoken Prophecy,s Be About The Lottery?//
For That Reason..ima Start Leaving ..so u could Never Again Hi To Me
i,ll Disappear in Pure smoke..Come Back and Do It again 3 times Harder
So u could Choke..
You Humans Walk While i Medatate and Float..
Beautiful Ladies with Nice Roundings i Hesitate To Poke...
im a Calm Dude..Never Hate On Folks
Lightning Striking Upon Urban Vikings..
Thirsty Animals Who Start The Biting..on Left Over Dust and Meat..
never had Honesty Out in the Public so i can,t Trust The streets//
Flow Nasty This is Nothing Neat..
Beating me is Like Picking up Rich chicks in Dirty Trucks and Jeeps//


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[Lock-Down]

yo i like it it was a catchy title it kept readind so it was good keep it up homey.

[K9_THESHIT]

yo i like it it was a catchy title it kept readind so it was good keep it up homey.

^W O W...What fucking catchy title? "Keystyle"?! You sir are a moron.



Now for your drop.You should've gotten the idea when your first thread was closed.This was a bad attempt.I mean your rhymes and rhymeschemes were simple.Every aspect of your piece was too basic.Read some pieces here in OM,and also read some tutorials in Help Desk about elevating on topicals.Then work from there.

[sILLable]

yea...k9 tell tha truth..very elementary..keep tryin and elevatin.~1~

[wordship]

iight goodlookz Lock down uppz