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  1. #1
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    the realness

    ayo i mind on my money, determined cuz im hungry,
    you new school hardrocks bit your whole style from me,
    i spit cuz thats another hustle,
    i ran the blocks on my own even though my moms told me that streets was trouble,
    to get out the bitch is the only way you beat the struggle,
    but i raised as a gorilla and its too hard to leave the jungles,
    niggas rob they own brother and say it aint personal and just business,
    i got more open drug markets than Baltimores west district,
    i spit like kool moe d and kool g rap in they prime,
    and i got niggas that dont got a choice but to adapt to time,
    locked in the hole, doing push ups till they chest is swoll,
    doing 10 to 15 gettin out at 40 years old,
    thats by the time they kids is grown,
    and got kids of they own
    see how my lifestyle could fuck wit ya dome.......,this is real shit
    only real can really fuck wit this realness

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    Sammy B
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    Really simple drop not many multis to help the flow, structure was off one line was really stretched. Vocab was weak you need more advanced words to make this stand out. Typical self glory type topic, you stayed on track pretty well and had one or two good lines, you just need to expand on that. Wasn't much emotion wasn't feeling alot of your lines. Try something more original next time and focus on moderate complexity

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    TreaZoN sILLable's Avatar
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    well sammy b hit it on point..ive seen some what beter from you as well....you need to elevate.....you didnt try as hard on this piece....keep tryin and elevatin.~1~


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    Green Hour Madness Bounce's Avatar
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    OK, please do not post garbage ass verses in OM. Yes, I did say garbage, not to mention you flooding OM with the garbage you call rhymes. This is pathetic, follow our rules in OM, if I have to delete any more of your posts, I will block you access to OM.

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