There's no other man

[Night]

If i never met God, who knows where i'd be
Maybe at the corner selling 20 pounds for Gs
Cuz it's a tough life, rough world, bad girls with mind on dough
Tryin to do good, but the devil always follows
That's why i need God with me, to protect me, to not make wild out and blast a semi
Seriously
It's too much for me to handle
I can't take all the drama, the beefs, and scandles
That's why i pray to God for forgivness for my sins
Whispering to him like i'm the Ying Yang Twins
I'm like.. (Whisper) God please forgive all the sins that i committed
It's a crazy life that i dont want to be livin (End of Whisper)
Cuz i have many enemies, that wanna get their hands on me
And make sure my body is buried in a cemetary
Cuz all they want is for me to get shot like Fifty
Thats why where ever i go i really need God wit me

[:.Apollo.:]

Nice topic... i like to read an open mic like this...
Flow was so so... fell off on some parts but the got back together...
Vocab was acceptable...
Structure was off... you could up that...

[:.Apollo.:]

But overall it was a decent verse...
stay up and keep elevatin... 1

[Night]

aight.......appreciate thr comment

[:.Apollo.:]

no problem...

[sILLable]

decent topic.....below average delievery.....good emotion....yin yang twins suck....elevate and check out tha link in my sig titled concrete roses...id appreciate it.~1~

[youngclip]

good drop i was feelin dat alot good shit yo apploo check out my battle youngclip vs pimpdawg

[Night]

aight............appreciate it niggaz.......i mean it.....1

[Night]

need more feedback!

[Night]

Need some more feedback...........i'll appreciate it...1

[-Trik§ta-]

Aight ish...

It all seemed forced though. Too short. No links.

Newb.