bad life

[mcl]

People have bad days, I had a bad life
ended up twice on the end of knife
got stabbed by some dude who was a hater
I woke up fucking 4 hours later
I was lying up in hospital with cops all around
Asking me what happened, saying the guy would be found
He wasn’t, he must have ran from the scene of the crime
This escape from death made me value my time
So from then on I’ve been spitting rap music
So for all u RB members life is great don’t lose it
Cause I came close to ending up gone
Dead cold and missed by none
But obviously I pulled through the shit
To live a life wishing for a number 1 hit

[JT MONEY$]

yo ya flow is decracefull get a life as a matter of fact here s the knife my rhyems have ya going for a flight dont get pissed cuz you just got dissed / listin up pussy ya shit soundin a lil to musshy you must be a pussy bringin that wake ass rap you should get slaped better yet beatin with my base ball bate u/ your just bitch made n im takin rap to the new stage im a hungey mc in rage n im changen the page to the next chapter

[mcl]

yo listen up jt money
your shit aint funny
i think u need to go back to your music class
go fuck your teacher mabye then youll pass
that should help with your wack ass lyrics
you got it from your folks yo that shits generic
and then drag ur ass back here
but dont take forever go ahead cry a tear

[SunSpit]

How about u 2 juss battle?? N o yea MCL diz is an OM so ima leave u feed. U need tah up your vocab n structure which would help your flow 2. Also get your wordplay up. But keep droppin n elevatin.

[BLUNT WRAP]

How about u 2 juss battle?? N o yea MCL diz is an OM so ima leave u feed. U need tah up your vocab n structure which would help your flow 2. Also get your wordplay up??

exactly even though ya both trash

[mcl]

464 posts i one month
u a nosey mothafucker get off ya hump
yo listen to this white boy who dont give a fuck
your lyrics are in the shit page of my scrap book
so ya wanna call both of us trash
my lyrics so hot theyll leave a fucking heat rash

[sILLable]

good emotion and imagery...weak piece though.your topic is played to high heaven...your wordplay and vocab and complexity lacked..keep elevatin and droppin...hit up the link in my sig titled God has a Gun

[*Peaches*]

it seems lik u really do have abd life doe..
the way u wrote this piece was shitty asa fuck bra... u need work in all parts
i'll give it a 3/10...
u need to work on vocan a lot and and the whole verse seemed kinda stupid in a way, topic wuz ok