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Thread: Those Who R.i.p

  1. #1
    dopey
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    Those Who R.i.p

    Its Sad To See Ppl Who Once Were Ur Homies/
    Disappera In An Instant And Leave/
    Not Talkkin Bout Da Ppl Who Flea/
    Talkin Bout Them Who D-i-e/
    Ppl Who Never Knew More But Life Full Of Misery/
    A Life Of Poverty And Full Of Tragedy/
    Aint Got No Choice But To Slang And Smoke Blunts Wit Ya-yo/
    Blastin Niggas Cuz They Soldiers Puffin Hydro/
    This Here Goes Out To All Them Who R.i.p/
    Niggas Who Lived In Da Hood Sorounded By G'z/
    Running From 5-0 Tryin To Survive/
    And Hopin For A Better Life/
    Cuz All They Could Do Is Hope/
    Making Paper By Slangin Dope/
    Thats Wat There Is To Do To Make A Living/
    Many Deaths And Still In Heaven We Believing/
    As A Thug A G Lives And Dies/
    Until Finally They Rise/
    And Family Cries/
    As They Rest Their Eyes/

  2. #2
    TreaZoN sILLable's Avatar
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    pretty decent..work on wordplay and structure..and some complexity...average drop..choose a more interesting topic...~1~


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