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    Shotty~man
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    Only So Much He Could Take.

    Only So Much He Could Take.


    He was an abused child barely past the age of ten
    bullied,at school just because he was smart an knew how to use the paper and pen
    then,one day he get's tired of being harrased,and decide's to kill every person that ever kicked his ass
    last, thing he said to his ex-class member's was "die bully die"
    and every one of them dropped like a bug sprayed fly.
    and as he walked away amungst the blood,carnage,and wasted live's
    a knife into his own chest he drive's.
    teacher's screaming parent's fall to their knees in pain
    as they see all their baby's missing a brain
    eternal rain, has been cast over the rest of their day's
    but mabe they should have raised,their kid's better as another one spray's.
    but it's a shame when kid's switch close to insanity
    vanity,come's into school and start's shooting people randomly.
    my perseption on the situation is that you should be sociable to all
    never be dragged down by peer preasure or your the only on who will take the fall.
    all,the thing's said here today happen's all the time and we see
    but next time you do just think tomorrow that same kid could embark on a killing-spree.

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    Shotty~man
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    looking for some honest feed back please.

  3. #3
    Shotty~man
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    uppin for feed.

  4. #4
    Shotty~man
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    uppin againnn... lol

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    TreaZoN sILLable's Avatar
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    this was below average...you need toelevate...and for christ sake use proper grammar..dont half ass your piece..that shit pisses me off..actualy try on some complexity..you had some emotion though...keep elevatin


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