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  1. #1

    Arrow The System

    Ayo man, the system has been gettin alot of my niggas introuble so i jus wanted to drop this right here for those still fightin it. Lets get em!

    The industry is buggin me showin no type of luv 2 me/
    Thoughts of suicide run through my mind all but suddenly/
    Its just a contest that makes stress that you collect/
    Gotta hold a tech and rep ya set for some respect/
    The Systems is out 2 get em(get em = blacks) & soon enuff its gonna hit em/
    Never miss em, it'll nick em, and if not it will restrict em/
    Punishment it heavy cruel for actin like a fool and loose your cool/
    Now you lose ya fame and your confused, head spinnin like a spool/
    The judgment is decided, your not excited your life is smited/
    So you riot and they like it so like a fire they ignite it/
    Struggle remains & takes more names, and makes your wanna play this game/
    they switch the frame, drive u insane, and take whats yours in thier name/
    The words your spittin, are not wats written, its their verse that your gettin/
    U try 2 stay hidden, your scared and shittin, you know you'll soon be hittin/
    Those 2 weak to reach thear peak, fall and crumble way beneath/
    So who will it be, to reach the peace, and withstand the industries heat//


    jus incase yall is wonderin...the "get em" part..... i dont mean 2 say blacks are the only ones battlin the system

    anyways thurr was a much betta drop from me for those who responded 2 my last drop it was just a story. just wanted 2 show ya i do really have skillz

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...75#post2942675
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...80#post2942680
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    Decent verse... though the system isnt out "JUST" to get blacks...
    nice flow, you could've done more with the vocab and made it a lil more complex
    I liked the structure to....
    :.Apollo .:

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    nice drop though... keep doin it and you'll keep elevatin
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    this was too simple...you could have done more with this mos def....you should keep levatin aon all aspects for real...not to bad..you got potetntial..and read tha rules before you post something..~1~


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    thx for the feed peoplez......keep em comin if ya can :yes:
    Last edited by Duece D; August 11th, 2005 at 01:44 PM
    da illest freestyla's

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    Lil Wayne

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