It Hurts!
they watch to see if im gone prosper/
feedback fuels me artist is the doctors/
my vision is to be a chart topper/
but mc's clown me and hand me oscar/
not acting proper is when they gotcha/
expose ya true self its a world shocka/
thats when its cases and im locked up/
t.u.n u hate and it hurts but cant stop us/
not that great, but you tried...
Def. gotta up the vocab and wordplay....
Try to choose a diff. topic and start over, make it more complex
:.Apollo .:
stay up, and keep droppin to elevate
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:.Apollo .:
read tha rules before you post somehting in here...for fucks sake....and you need to elevate as it is anyway....keep elevatin..and read tha rules(and follow them).~1~
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